I Live Two Lives ~ Poem by M. Asim Nehal

I Live Two Lives ~

Rating: 5.0


I live two lives
one on the exterior,
and one within my head.
You will see an abyss -
if you stare into my eyes.
I strongly advise you not to look any farther -
otherwise, you may plunge into my thoughts,
albeit only a few have done so far -
and they are now a part of my universe.

Don't you see, I'm a poet who lives in two worlds,
and two different lives.

Tuesday, April 25, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: poet,philosophical
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 25 April 2023

Perfect expression........ brilliantly penned....thank u, dear friend....

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 25 April 2023

Bravo Asim TFS

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Martinez Salotori 25 April 2023

We all play different parts in our lives and poet is no exception.

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David Wood 25 April 2023

I think one life is hard enough, and I think my heard is all but empty.

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Juhaina Tumlu 25 April 2023

Yeah only poet lives two lives at the same time. One for himself and the other for his poetry.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 02 May 2023

Interesting, beautifully written and deep.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 02 May 2023

Interesting, beautifully written and

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Indira Renganathan 29 April 2023

'Don't you see, I'm a poet who lives in two worlds, and two different lives.'....simply superb...thank you Asim

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Sandra Feldman 27 April 2023

Life is such a mystery and so are we. Qt least you know yourself and are willing to face your reality. I think most artists and poets. writers and creative individuals lead a double life, which may help us from becoming ' totally insane'. Great poem and so handsomely written

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Richard Wlodarski 26 April 2023

Dr Nehal, you bring a whole new dimension to Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde. If only Mr Hyde had looked farther into Dr Jekyll's eyes...he may have gone further. He may have overcome his evil impulses.

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