I Lose My Girl Poem by Yasser Koor
I Lose My Girl
Alone …Alone …Alone
It’s so hard to be alone
With whole my family
With whole my friends
However I think I’m here alone.
Sad …Sad …Sad...
I lost a beautiful thing I had
I told my mum I told my dad
That I feel good I don’t feel bad
Should I feeling happy or feeling sad
I don’t know I don’t understand
Light …Light …light …
Dark is here where is the light
I can’t see I can’t think I can’t write
And for my happiness I’ll fight
To know what the difference
Between the wrong and the right
Feel …Feel …Feel …
Love is not easy thing to feel
She hurts my heart, I try to heal
She leaves me with the pain
She leaves me with the tears.
'love is not an easy thing to feel' was the greatest part of this lovely poem...it is really a nice poem....keep going
mmm I don't know why but I really liked it it is really wonderful poem
'She leaves me with the pain She leaves me with the tears.' A painful composition of love.
I can't recommend this one. When I first saw it, I thought I would, but the words don't complement the structure of the poem. That really makes it worse not better. GW62
well expressed feelings deeply and touchingly said
the repitition of alone emphasizes on the meaning.i think its a great poem that has many great aspects.
This your third poem talking about your lost love or your love that ends you are badly injured GUY iam sure you have a real story to tell i hope you find your girl never lose her again
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/6/2025 1:08:40 PM # 1.0.0
yasser-awh so sad and alone dont worry she'll be back lovely write lots of rhyming and alliteration a ++++++++10 you deserve regards anjalie