I Lost You Poem by Vaibhav Pandey

I Lost You

Rating: 4.3


When the world was awake
in awe of the dazzling light
showered by your resplendent face,
I was slumbering in a corner
amidst the darkness of ignorance.

Filled with voidness, now,
have all my life to rue,
love could have blossomed,
but instead, it flew.

Smiling at my ill fate,
I feel I didn't deserve you
And that must be the reason why,
I lost you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
tara star 21 April 2009

NIce, , , in short words u described ur deisre...i kindly liked it..keep it up

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Myrtle Thomas 07 April 2009

Hold on and a girl as exquisite as your poetry will find you.A wonderful poem of requite love and longing.Loved it.a 10

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Pablo Cruise 18 March 2009

poignant pen, Vaibhav. Sound imagery

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anurag duggal 12 March 2009

Well strange are the ways of the lord hope he has a plan for you and a better gal as well :))

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Carl Harris 22 February 2009

This is a very well written and expressive poem, Vaibhav, and it displays an acute understanding of the fickleness of love and life quite well. We all have been in a similar situation, and somtimes being too timid to act, lose an opportunity that we often regret the rest of our lives. This poem expresses that melancholy feeling far better than I have seen in such similar poems. Carl.

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Miriam Maia Padua 22 August 2009

nice style and thoughts... sad yet so lovely expressed love and despair in most touching thoughts.. 10++ Lovelots, Maia

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Rup Pokharel 29 July 2009

Vaibhav jii, May god bless you. Do run your pen and use more your brain there are so many longing to read more and more from you.

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Ritty Patnaik 25 July 2009

lovely poem vaibhav! love will surely come your way, like a wave in the heart.best wishes. ritty

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Perhaps you lost your love because you didn't realize, but perhaps you will find another just as beautiful. I particularly liked the rhyming couplet a the end of the last two stanzas. Great poem. 10 Karin Anderson

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Kalyani Rajalingham 29 April 2009

Nothing is ever lost until you lose Hope. Learn to grow wings then my dear friend!

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