When the world was awake
in awe of the dazzling light
showered by your resplendent face,
I was slumbering in a corner
amidst the darkness of ignorance.
Filled with voidness, now,
have all my life to rue,
love could have blossomed,
but instead, it flew.
Smiling at my ill fate,
I feel I didn't deserve you
And that must be the reason why,
I lost you.
Hold on and a girl as exquisite as your poetry will find you.A wonderful poem of requite love and longing.Loved it.a 10
Well strange are the ways of the lord hope he has a plan for you and a better gal as well :))
This is a very well written and expressive poem, Vaibhav, and it displays an acute understanding of the fickleness of love and life quite well. We all have been in a similar situation, and somtimes being too timid to act, lose an opportunity that we often regret the rest of our lives. This poem expresses that melancholy feeling far better than I have seen in such similar poems. Carl.
nice style and thoughts... sad yet so lovely expressed love and despair in most touching thoughts.. 10++ Lovelots, Maia
Vaibhav jii, May god bless you. Do run your pen and use more your brain there are so many longing to read more and more from you.
lovely poem vaibhav! love will surely come your way, like a wave in the heart.best wishes. ritty
Perhaps you lost your love because you didn't realize, but perhaps you will find another just as beautiful. I particularly liked the rhyming couplet a the end of the last two stanzas. Great poem. 10 Karin Anderson
Nothing is ever lost until you lose Hope. Learn to grow wings then my dear friend!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
NIce, , , in short words u described ur deisre...i kindly liked it..keep it up