I'M Gonna Leave This World.. - Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

To-day I need a lurking place;
Can I thirst with my eyes peace?
All the hope gifted me pain,
All the dream lost in vain,
Nothing survives me in the vale of tears,
And nor a glow in the sky of my stars.
Oh, make free me as a man, dead.
I like to fly as a soul but ne'er I did,
A disharmonious deed in this world,
May my pains be squeezed out as blood!
I'd like to wander as a soul in the sky,
As I am now drowning in the struggles-sea,
I need a freedom from this life.
Amidst all the shadows of hate were rife.
I'm gonna see a pool of blood;
I'm gonna leave this world.

Comments about I'M Gonna Leave This World.. by VIPINS PUTHOORAN

  • (12/7/2011 8:52:00 PM)

    Life, which is good, consists of pleasure and, unfortunately, pain. Such pain is sometimes overwhelming; we simply long to escape it all. (Report) Reply

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  • Unwritten Soul (12/3/2011 3:46:00 AM)

    Hey Vipins, wake up...are you got bad day dreaming again...where are you going if you decide to leave this world? ? wanna go space outside, well think twice, no oxygen for you there my dear friend hahaha...Joking, what's wrong Vipins, come on tell me what is bothering your mind...'pool of blood', hey better we donate to hospital is able to bend in many shape as you want if you try to change..dont let sad taking over your soul..i know what you can do..BIG SMILE, sure not bitter like pills..yuck! ! ! come one Vipins, wake up, stand strong and still in this world, space outside dont have good curry you know, Only india got it :) Cheer some_Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Sajna Kailas (12/3/2011 1:56:00 AM)

    ohhhhhhhh very sad poem! shows the great grief inside! (Report) Reply

  • Louis Cecile (12/3/2011 1:34:00 AM)

    Good strong piece of writing. Some of the language almost resembles Christian prayer. Good sense of flow as if wallow in the struggles of life. (Report) Reply

  • (12/2/2011 11:53:00 PM)

    Death is something I have experienced a lot of this year and have written on it too. Very well written Vipins, very emotional. (Report) Reply

  • (12/2/2011 5:47:00 PM)

    Depressing but thats the subject matter, the language is rich and filled with amzing texture fantastic write, don't leave this world becasue I want you to write more. Regards (Report) Reply

  • (12/2/2011 3:30:00 PM)

    Dark. Very dark. And passionate.
    This line:
    As I am now drowning in the struggles-sea,
    I need a freedom from this life.
    especially caught my attention.
    You are a skilled writer!
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  • (12/1/2011 2:35:00 PM)

    'Amidst all the shadows of hate were rife.
    I'm gonna see a pool of blood;
    I'm gonna leave this world. '

    Beautiful lines, truly a phenomenal write.
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  • (12/1/2011 5:01:00 AM)

    A very sad poem, a beautiful poem.
    Sometimes our demons seem to take over,
    They fill our minds with thoughts that are not
    really ours. We have to fight them, and when we
    win, we are a much better person for it. The demons
    can never win. We are born to beat them.
    It is our destiny to beat them, to help others in poems.
    A good poem my friend.
    (Report) Reply

  • (12/1/2011 4:33:00 AM)

    Why this sad poem? ? ? ? ? (Report) Reply

  • Jacqui Broad (12/1/2011 3:58:00 AM)

    As a spirit in the sky, who is going to leave us beautiful poems, hmm? One day your day will come, my friend, but don't decide to let it be soon. Even I who have reason to want to die, don't even think of ending the Higher One's purpose for me. In times of trouble, He test our value, and won't put any obstacle in our way He didn't think we'd be able to overcome. So, lift your chin, dear friend, and don't leave before your time... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 1, 2011

Poem Edited: Wednesday, November 14, 2012

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