I'M Only Human (For Diane) Poem by Valerie Dohren

I'M Only Human (For Diane)

Rating: 5.0


Oh God, I’m only human
I haven’t been here long
I’m not blessed with divinity
So bound to get it wrong

Oh God, I’m only human
I try to be so good
I learnt to swim quite early
And hence survived The Flood

Oh God, I’m only human
I shout and curse and pout
And though I may not show it
I’m really quite devout

Oh God, I’m only human
I never go to Church
I’m sorry to neglect You
And leave You in the lurch

Oh God, You're up in Heaven
Whilst I am down below
What is it like to be there?
I’d really like to know

Oh God, I’m only human
Yet always strive to be
A good upstanding citizen -
And ask You round for tea

Oh God, I’m only human
I say my prayers each day
I’ve not yet won the lottery
To that, what do You say?

(Oh God, we’re only human
So this I You implore
To set to rights this planet
And bring an end to war)

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Written in response to Diane Hine's comment on my poem 'I'm Just A Woman) . I'm sure God has a sense of humour.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Brown 14 April 2013

Good poem Val. It tickled me pink. As to bringing an end to war - sadly, evil men make too much money out of it to do that.

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Captain Cur 13 April 2013

Personally I think both of you are divine... Pirate Girl con-curs!

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Valsa George 06 April 2013

Really enjoyed this sequel! Of all, I love the third stanza! As human beings, we always have our weaknesses. But, if we are devout, God gives us the grace to wade through the adversities of life and forgives our imperfections!

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Hans Vr 05 April 2013

Superb poem with a serious message brought on a humoristic note. A poem that brings some joy in the reader's mind. A poem that enlightens a bit one's day Excellent.

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Danny Draper 05 April 2013

I'm just a poet and dig this more and hope that you are heard about war and will wishfully hope on many a score.

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Patricia Grantham 25 April 2013

This is really a magnificent poem and one that I truly enjoyed reading. We all are Human and therefore are imperfect. Hopefully we will learn from our mistakes. Most appreciative!

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Sandra Feldman 15 April 2013

I think that the Human Animal is Nature's greatest mistake, however poets that write like you are an exception.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 15 April 2013

Amazing poem, enjoyed reading it. Siya_! !

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Kelvin Owusu 15 April 2013

a lovely lovely piece, enjoyed the humor in this brings a realism in humanity

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Mary Forrester 14 April 2013

Loved it Valerie, funny.

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