Wednesday, July 4, 2012

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I meditate- If ever there's a third world war
What'll happen to new morn's offspring ?
I meditate- If Earth sprouts out blood
What'll happen of the mirth of innocent ploughs ?
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Gopaldas Neeraj
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 10 October 2025

A very perceptive poem. Great thoughts to ponder about. Great closure lines! ! !

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Lyn Paul 20 October 2019

A powerful write of much needed peace. Thank you and Bless you.

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Dr Antony Theodore 20 October 2019

Will stillness spread its shroud? Will this world end in smoke? Will no nightingale sing? Will no cuckoo cry? great meditation. tony

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Tamara Beryl Latham 20 October 2019

A great translation of an epic poem that forces the reader to contemplate thoughts of peace over war. Great job and thanks for posting. Congratulations! : -)

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Malabika Ray Choudhury 20 October 2019

Excellent, inspiring poem - the translation is superb! Reminds us why we meditate -the thoughts which bring peace and tranquility! Congratulations on this poem being chosen!

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Mahtab Bangalee 20 October 2019

Yes Destination of every martyr is PEACE No war now, No war now……… Yes, meditation is PEACE only on WAR, now and never //great poem, love it

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Dominic Windram 20 October 2019

Epic poem advocating peace...such evocative language employed here...most inspiring! ! !

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Savita Tyagi 20 October 2018

Thrilled to read Neeraj ji’s Poem on front page and rediscover again some of his beautiful songs.

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Edward Kofi Louis 20 October 2018

Will light become a slave of flowers? Meditation. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 October 2018

Such a well penned poem by Gopaldas Neeraj and a nice translation by R.P. Chaddah...................

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Etawah, Uttar Pradesh / India
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