I Promise Poem by Aarzoo Mehek

I Promise

Rating: 5.0


I promise to be
Gentle to my soul
I promise to support
My fomented heart
I promise to recuperate
Each pore of my being
I promise one last time
To fix my soul
Of all the cynicism.

© Aarzoo Mehek

I Promise
Tuesday, August 18, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: cynicism ,fixing,heartache,soul
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kostas Lagos 18 August 2020

A big promise...a great poem

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Varsha M 18 August 2020

This is awesome beautiful. Admirations.

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M Asim Nehal 18 August 2020

And you always fulfil your promises. Masha Allah. Nice way to keep motivated.100++++

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 24 August 2020

A promise to the soul to be gentle, soft and soothing. Only a person who can recognise the beauty and the purity of the self or the soul can remain happy and peaceful. A beautiful soul will be quick to respond the beauty of another soul too. Thank you dear Poetess Aarzoo for this profound poem....Loved it....10

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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 August 2020

A well executed piece. Simply superb.....10++++

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Rajnish Manga 18 August 2020

A very noble approach which highlights one's duty to be faithful to himself or herself whatever be the situation. Fulfill all these self-oriented promises in life. Thanks.

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Soran M. H 18 August 2020

I am sure you are keeping your promise on that is why you are a poet and your poems are so good, excellent 10/10

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Soran M. H 18 August 2020

I promise one last time To fix my soul Of all the cynicism.

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