A Wild Flower Poem by shakil ahmed

A Wild Flower

Rating: 5.0

A Wild Flower

I picked a wild flower
Full with beauty and fragrance,
From an unknown garden
To adorn my silent heart
That was wrapped in
Flesh and bone of my body
So long,
My eyes were shining
Like the stars of unending sky
And rummaging the world
For a wild flower
To quench the thirst of my
Lonely heart
One day I noticed
My loving flower
Was withering fast
And I wiped
The lens of my eyes
Where tears lingered
I got grief-stricken
And reminded the whole world
That it is the doom of
Every human being.

Wednesday, November 11, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
Sanjukta Nag 12 November 2015

And reminded the whole world That it is the doom of Every human being. this lines are very thoughtful with a philosophical undertone. great one.

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Seema Chowdhury 11 November 2015

Powerful and an expressive write.

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Jhadeswar Khanda 11 November 2015

very nice! The tears was fallen from my eyes. Thanks for shayering it.

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M Asim Nehal 16 November 2015

Indeed, life is a wild flower, nice metaphor and flawless poem...Liked it.10

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Souren Mondal 16 November 2015

A very well written poem Shakil.. The use of the flower metaphor is really apt.. Thank you for sharing..

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Uzefa Rashida M.a 12 February 2016

well depicted about how mankind slowly withers away towards death.

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Kewayne Wadley 30 November 2015

Beautiful wild flower indeed! +10 KW

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 November 2015

Lonely heart; but, there is true love ahead. Nice work.

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Anil Kumar Panda 19 November 2015

Very nice. Loved the emotion in the poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 November 2015

Wonderful wild flower is picked up with beauty and fragrance with this interestingly drafted poem definitely. Fantastic sharing....10

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shakil ahmed

shakil ahmed

Badarpur, Assam, India.
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