I saw you as I`ve never seen before
The moon upon your lovely face did play
Your eyes as starlight fixed on heaven`s door
So sparkled at the closing of the day
Then softly in the golden fires of dawn
Your smile shone brighter than my eyes have seen
To greet me as an angel in the morn` -
O sweeter than it yet had ever been
Your voice was like a songbird set in flight
Enchanting all my mind and sorrowed heart
Which soars above the land in gay delight -
Sweet music of the world to thus impart
And greatly was your countenance defined
As `gainst the azure skies it was then set
It lingered as a vision in my mind -
O I am yet so glad that we have met
Entranced with all your beauty is my soul
I ne`er will ever feel such joy again -
My weary heart forever to console
And tender love eternal to sustain
I love your Style of poetry! ! ! They are flawless! This is yet another example and makes me want to read it again just because it is so beautiful (rather than having to fathom it out) x. I aspire to be as good as you!
so beautiful and mesmerizing...mam your every poem is like sweet bewitching melody to me..this piece is glorious, magnificent....and so many beautiful things... thank you so much for sharing love, payal
A grand and precious awakening and when the morrow comes it shall be even better. Your muse has returned, better than ever
A beautiful loving and compassionate poem of adoration and the love of one to know another so well in intricate and careful description and emotion. Uplifting and celebratory of lasting dear love.
Great poem as always Valerie, great imagery too. Siya_! !
its beautiful. i really liked this one! its a humble request to you to read mine also and dropp your comments...!
A great heartfelt poem full of beautiful imagery, amazing write!
And now I read the sadness of that last look at breathing flesh and I have she'd a tear. Still beautiful.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
So enchanting Val, this poem shows such heartfelt love, and such a pleasure to read.