I Sleep In Darkness Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

I Sleep In Darkness

Rating: 5.0


i sleep in darkness
it's no pleasure
it's more emptiness
than love and leisure

the dreams don't come yet
and I'm listening like mad
to what? i don't know

deep cascading water
flows through the deep realm
i'm listening
but above all
i watch and
i observe

you're right
distance really exists
but not in our dream-dom

distance really exists enorm
that's waking up
in our dream-dom
heart distance equals
so true as ever

you told me that!
and i am convinced,
my heart is happiest eversince!

A.D. Saturday Feb 27 2021

I Sleep In Darkness
Saturday, February 27, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: darkness,sleep,water
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
ode to sleep, ode to dreams, distance is real, miles away, but not in our hearts, so closest and stay, enjoy this sleep poem, thank you for reading and giving your response/comments, God's Blessings in abundance for you all. Best wishes from The Netherlands, Sylvia Frances Chan Dutch poetess Saturday 27 Feb 2021
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 03 March 2021

I find this poem quite introspective and poetic---5 stars

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Susan Williams 03 March 2021

I hate it when PH knocks me off before I get my post published

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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 March 2021

Wonderful piece of work! Many congratulations! !

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Varsha M 27 February 2021

Sleep is rashphody. Eyes can inch the miles on geographical ground mind can map various routesto reach it but in heart even miles appears in centimetre size. Beautiful night poem.

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Varsha M 08 March 2021

I posted else it's lost. Congratulations for being chosen as poem of the day Sylvia

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 October 2021

Thank you so much dear poets for your great supports.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 October 2021

Yes, distance really exists yet when someone is in our hearts, we will never miss his / her absence. Our love will close the gap between us. A beautiful poem brilliantly woven. To my Poem List.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 October 2021

Through our sleep, a dream may come and it can bridge the distance for a loved one even if it is just ephemeral.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 October 2021

Revisiting this wonderful and discerning poem. Brilliant lines that provoke the mind.

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Li Su Pen 07 July 2021

Wonderful poem with beautiful picture and deep thoughts. Thank you!

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