I Will Be More Than What I Am Poem by Obed dela Cruz

I Will Be More Than What I Am

Rating: 3.8


Even the storms’ blow seems so strong,
Oh I want that peace to come how I long.
Oh when shall these stormy days end
Yes, I don’t have a very strong hand
But I must stand it faith because I can do it.
I don’t want to be always a lion’s meat
I will spread my wings and fly miles
So that my face would always bear smiles

When I am down,
I will never frown
I don’t want to be down forever
Being a coward will be never

I am born with a courageous heart,
I will paint an art.

I will goal very high
And I will just have a sigh
I don’t want to fall.
I will never entertain the spirit of doubt
If it’s fighting for freedom
I will never walk out from truth
I will fight the frightening heart
And shall have that courageous heart.

I will be more than what I am

Copyright © 2009 by Obed Dela Cruz

(To use this poem in a legal way, you could email me in princeobed_dc@yahoo.com but of course, you cannot own the poem because you will be violating the law in information systems and copyright)

(July 21,2009; Marikina City; 5: 50PM)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marvin Brato 21 July 2009

Very inspiring write portraying courage!

0 0 Reply
Isaac Maliya 08 August 2009

This is really nice. Inspiring poem for all to read in my opinion!

0 0 Reply
Alex Rios 27 July 2009

This is a good poem.... I can tell your the one who doesn't show that your down and on the inside you're breaking down. I really like it! -Alex

0 0 Reply
Ency Bearis 26 July 2009

a show of brevity...and confidence...a well written in poetic craftmanship....

0 0 Reply
Cynthia Buhain-baello 25 July 2009

Very honest and inspiring. Your second stanza must have read 'frozen' not 'froen'? I could not find that word....on the whole it is a well-constructed poem.

0 0 Reply
AkosiDArk Sugbuanon 21 July 2009

very heart felt poem there....Praise the Lord....and thanks to you Bro.

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success