..I Will Never Fall In Love Again Poem by Eyan Desir

i quite like this although i am not a fan of using numbers rather than words but i guess thats just a personal opinion - 10

stealing from a famous lines of a poet on her.. significantly penned.... tell her that she would find thee love she want in the one that does not take her to bed, until thye both arre wed.. and that is the man of virtue.

Betrayal, broken heart, it is a topic known well, not only in the poetry. The life is showing its large sharp claw sometimes and is wounding in the unpredictable way. This is with betrayal and inflicted consciously pain, whether not - but set. Love torments are able to weaken the man, and what's more to kill. Here the crying won't help and it isn't counting the amount of pleaded tears. They are so who forever are complaining oneself loves. Are also so who are forgiving and are coming back to the partner. However nobody comes with a warranty and alone isn't giving it, that the fate for him then again won't play prank. It is just 'that's life'. Love and the betrayal often go out with themselves in steam. It is my reflection after reading your poems to the topic love of 'surprises'. I like your poems, the one also. I am greeting :) Maria Barbara Korynt

Its really sad poem...laid out very well, last verse is really good.

I really like the rythm of this poem.

this poem speak in itself about the hurt and pain but love will not stop flowing from the hurt......... I like the entire theme and its write............

You express your feelings very strongly with this one.

Love is so strong..........it will conquer you and your friend again...........Good Write.10+++.........

Love once again strikes... It can be very harsh... This poem I like, it talks about what love can sometimes do to a person. I can hurt forever and make someone never love again.

This is beautifully written, Eyan. I enjoyed the flow of thoughts, and the tone.