..Lust.. A Collection Of 7 Deadly Sins.......

Rating: 5.0
Straight from the gutters of hell!
She blows, sweeter than sugar
She burns, flaming desires
Consuming all our emotions
Imitating the wings of love
Exciting and breath taking
Over flowing souls with her passion
Raging with infatuation
Hungry with an obsession
Not submitting to devotion
So powerful and strong
Luscious tasty desires
Never last a lifetime
But cause some a lifetime of pain

04 August 2009 Copyright © ® Eyan desir. All rights reserved
Wednesday, August 5, 2009
Tom Fox 26 September 2009
great command of vocabulary but again...just a one-sided, narrow minded viewpoint...
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Paul Cutting 03 September 2009
still a fan, very nicely done, Please read ' Need II' of mine als
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Miriam Maia Padua 18 August 2009
very nice, Eyan an awakening piece... Lust...can cripple our soul.. I love your theme.. 10+++ lovelots, Maia
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Shekhar Joshi 12 August 2009
nice read.......i liked the last lines the most.....others are equally good........ good one, , , , , ,
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rago rago 12 August 2009
fantastic desires take our lives and are not we sensuous stall.........
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Luwi Habte 11 August 2009
cute, as usual... Luwi
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i like how you said it.
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Marcella D 11 August 2009
very beautiful poem and very creative of you
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~ Jon London ~ 07 August 2009
This is a great piece Eyan...well structured and flows like a dream...I can't understand why it's been rated so low....keep up the great work....lovely to have you back
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Leah Michele 06 August 2009
I like it! It goes through the different parts of LUST, describing to a point that you can almost feel it
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