I wish I could untie my hand, set it free,
So that if you offered yours again to me
I could accept your proposal knowing that
Our relationship was not ambiguous...
I wish I could open the valves of my heart
And let the love I harbor pour freely out
And cleanse those wounds
That have not mended rightly
Scarring me visibly with melancholy...
I wish my poetry had the potency
To convince you that I love you truly
And that the very place where all things must end
Is the place most likely to begin again...
But, I do not wish to undo what I have done
Because from mistakes made I have also grown
And struggled for wisdom that is essential
To capacity for higher potential...
I wish the greatest wish of all, for true love
For this I have waited to know when it comes
It shall be genuine and not misleading
Candid, not disguised-playful, not deceiving...
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only one comment - i love you truly, may god bless you with sound health with heartiest regards
only one comment - i love you truly, may god bless u with sound health, with heartiest regards
True Love is as much a fairytale as real. It's of both of what we dream of having. And when we have it sometimes we don't even know we do. A surreal feeling is that of true love. Just the words coming out of my mouth bring a feeling of happiness I have yet to feel. I think at one time I was their. But now its gone and I have nothing to which it compares. Some say your lucky if you even find it once. Going after seconds odds become astronomical of finding it yet again. Yet I continue the search knowing I might meet the futility of it. But I can't know what is in vain and what is not. So regardless I will always give this all I got. Some say it is certain but is it even after death. A loss of someone so young. A life so precious suddenly gone before you even get to experience its full potential. My question is how does grief effect true love?
we all need to make mistakes, so when we do get it right we know it's right. A great poem.
I wish I could open the valves of my heart And let the loveI harbor pour freely out And cleanse those wounds What an amazing poem what a breathtaking words!
Some good thoughts in this one. Read mine - Saturday Morning Mood - Adeline
This is a wonderful poem, the words dance so naturally with each other and create a lovely harmony. Good write and so true. My favorite lines But, I do not wish to undo what I have done Because from mistakes made I have also grown And struggled for wisdom that is essential To capacity for higher potential... Thank yo for sharing, ~Besa
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Heart warming words! Your poem suggests that there is someone who feels for everyone.Beautiful poem!