Sunday, December 29, 2013

If? Comments

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If I could, sprinkle some words of happiness in your life.
If I could, spray some smiles in your face.
If I could, steal away some of your unhappiness.
If I could sow some seeds of Inspirations in you.
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Geetha Jayakumar
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Amitava Sur 25 January 2014

These Ifs are actually some noble thoughts to please the person who is loved, you desire to remain in the memories even when you'll be no more........ well done.

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Bursting with beauty that flows from a river of qualitative questions. Well done my friend!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 January 2014

If I could be in your sweet memories when I am no more! ... lovely lines....10 if and but should not decide express helplessness and confide we are intellegent human let us hope and cherish as man and wman

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Khairul Ahsan 30 December 2013

'If I could be in your sweet memories when I am no more! ' - That is the success of any man or woman in this world, i.e to remain in others' sweet memories when s/he is no more. A nice poem.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 30 December 2013

Beautiful poem that makes a difference in lives of many. Thank you.

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Rajesh Thankappan 30 December 2013

If is a strong word reflecting our yearning for another set of circumstance. A Fantastic poem.

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Rubab Atwal 30 December 2013

an amazing poem.everything in life would have hanged 'if'' our dreams came true.. sweet write

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 29 December 2013

Hello Poet. A very small word with very large implications... well done. Loyd

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Yasmin Khan 29 December 2013

All 'ifs' are the voice of a beautiful heart...........a nice poem

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Unwritten Soul 29 December 2013

Geetha, this is sweet dish for readers, thank you :) Happy new year to u and all of u there_Soul

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Anil Kumar Panda 29 December 2013

very nice.beautifully done.liked it.

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Htetmyet Ne' Ye' 29 December 2013

This is brilliant, Pure genius. I love your style. Keep up the great work! (And check out my poems too)

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Gajanan Mishra 29 December 2013

very good poem, thanks. Please read my new poems..

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Geetha Jayakumar

Geetha Jayakumar

Kerala Palakkad
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