If I Believe Poem by Piyush Dey

If I Believe

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Two pieces of bread and a
glass of water,
i think that enough to quench my
hunger, and in this winter,
i may have nothing more than
this, if i believe,
the road is clear and the
mountains, the misty mountains
just above that road are not steep
and dark,
if i believe that the snow that
covers my path with its tinged
fragrance, is no more devil,
that's enough, that's enough-
to keep me walking,
If i believe, this winter,
this dusky shadow of the
moonlight, will soon disappear,
the spring, of course, will come
with the shiny sunlight,
If i believe that in those cliffs
my dream awaits me and doesn't
let me sleep even for a second,
throughout my journey,
no matter how storm there might
be-
i will climb and i will fall off,
i will start again, but-
i will reach there- to kiss the
sun,
and smile and cry and breath the
very pleasure of my victory,
if i believe....

Wednesday, August 6, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: trust
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lyn Paul 09 August 2014

So wonderful to believe. And how we must for then we can climb any mountain. Thanks so much

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Neela Nath Das 09 August 2014

A wonderful poem with nice imagery.If anyone gets stuck to one's dream it becomes true.

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Valerie Dohren 10 August 2014

They say all things are possible, one just needs to believe - very good Plyush, well expressed.

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Valsa George 10 August 2014

Every thing is possible for a man who believes! This is the hope that should keep pulling us in the face of adversities! Very well put!

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Allotey Abossey 24 June 2015

Your poem inspires greatly and teaches the need to believe which is a necessity for life.. God bless you

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Geetha Jayakumar 24 January 2015

Beautiful poem on firm determination and key to be successful in ones life. Inspiring write. Loved reading it.

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Akhtar Jawad 08 January 2015

A firm belief brings determination and it's determination that leads the man to the apex. a nice and beautiful poem...............10

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Daniel Brick 19 August 2014

This a poem of faith, inner strength, hope, belief in the triumph of good will - these are all wonderful things. You certainly show in the fervent way you wrote this that YOU BELIEVE IT. I admire your effort and applaud your poem. But I confess I don't share your faith, strength, hope (see list in 1st line) - but don't let my reaction diminish what you believe and don't stop writing poems of optimism. You are very good at this! And many people NEED to hear this message.

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Amitava Sur 13 August 2014

A strong belief can reach a person to a greater height of success or peace provided that belief is in tact.... Thanks for sharing the idea through this poem

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