If You Close Your Eyes Poem by Practicing Poetess

If You Close Your Eyes

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If you close your eyes,
Can you still feel my hug?
Can you feel my imprint on you
From when we were warm and snug?

You phoned; asked if I was okay
I said, I'm missing you
We shared a laugh, concluded with
'Beans and Nachos'*, as we do.

While glad to hear your voice, I miss
Your loving arms around me
I was secure when I would feel
Your warmth and strength surround me.

Take care, Mi amor. When you return,
We'll both be so excited.
How sweet will be the day when we
Are finally reunited.

Wednesday, December 20, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love,missing you
* 'Beans and Nachos' is our funny way of saying 'Buenas Noches'. He taught me that.
Dedicated to my traveling man, who is away on a L-O-N-G trip!
Rebecca Navarre 25 December 2017

Ever So Beautifully Heart Warming! ! ! ! ! Ever So Beautifully Sweet! ! ! ! ! Such Beautiful Memories! ! ! ! ! Buenas Noches? Goodnight? not sure if thats right... :) Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Endless 1OS! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Practicing Poetess 12 January 2018

Thanks Becca for your appreciation of my short, simple little poem! I'd be hard-pressed to decide if reality or fantasy makes for better subject material. I suppose I'll let my readers decide that! :)

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O Poet Me Poety 24 December 2017

yes we all phoned to wish you A VERY HAPPY MERRY AND GAY CHRISTMAS

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 20 December 2017

A heartwarming piece. Very lovingly done.

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Practicing Poetess 20 December 2017

Ah, Rose Marie, so we meet again! :) Thank you for reading and appreciating my work, and for your generous comments!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 December 2017

Warmness of love can be felt well still in condition of closing eyes. Every emotion comes automatically in screen of mind. Strength of love surrounds life. Loving arms protect from danger. An amazing and brilliant poem is very well penned...10

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Practicing Poetess 20 December 2017

And Happy Christmas to you, Kumarmani!

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Practicing Poetess 20 December 2017

Kumar, Thank you so, so very much! :)

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