Sandra Feldman

Impossible Wish - Poem by Sandra Feldman

Oh, if only one could liberate the Soul,
As one does with an imprisoned Dove,
If only Love could fix it all,
Like faith is supposed to do,
With mountains that can move along,
Thru shadows, as the day is long.

I want that Power,
So I can fly to you,
And have a Heaven,
Here on Earth
Made only for us Two.

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Comments about Impossible Wish by Sandra Feldman

  • Dee Corpolongo (8/11/2014 10:20:00 AM)

    Beautiful vision and a beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

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  • (7/19/2014 12:49:00 PM)

    beautiful... i really like the rhymes! !
    each line is full of love :)
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  • Babatunde Aremu (7/9/2014 4:29:00 AM)

    Powerful usage of imagery. I like the poem and the theme. Great write. Bravo! (Report) Reply

  • Jayatissa K. Liyanage (7/9/2014 3:55:00 AM)

    You said it Sandra. There is nothing that can not be done, for love, as almost all lovers do think. A Brilliantly wrote metaphoric display, it is. (Report) Reply

  • Sina Farajzadeh (7/8/2014 12:10:00 AM)

    Hi. There are nice usages of similes in this poem. Good Luck (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren (7/7/2014 7:03:00 AM)

    RHeaven on earth - what a wonderful concept, but a long way away I fear. (Report) Reply

  • Brian Johnston (7/6/2014 8:30:00 PM)

    Oh Dear Poet, haven't you heard? 'It's the thought that counts, ' they say. And if that be true, then the reality of your wish, could not produce a better result than your poem in any case... Your lover lucky indeed! (Report) Reply

  • Alice Perfect (7/6/2014 9:54:00 AM)

    A spectacular write
    outta sight!
    But insight too
    by The Grand Poetess You!
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  • Neela Nath Das (7/6/2014 4:58:00 AM)

    Ah! So nice wish! If I were....... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, July 6, 2014

Poem Edited: Sunday, July 6, 2014

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