Impressions Poem by Valerie Dohren


Rating: 5.0

Ripples in the water
Teardrops in the snow
Footprints in the golden sand
Paintings by Van Gogh

Rain upon the window
Colours in the sky
Phantoms drifting through the night
Eagles as they fly

Music by Debussy
Hands that mould pink clay
Dreams that float like thistledown
Through the fleeting day

Stars set in the night sky
Asterisks of time
Shadows falling on the hills
Fossils in the slime

Poetry by Rimbaud
Words upon the page
Actors playing out their parts
‘All the world’s a stage’ …..

Mary Forrester 04 March 2014

Valerie, an absolutely beautiful poem, you are truly gifted.

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Joseph Anderson 04 March 2014

Mary said it and she is so right.I love your great economy with words. You are in tune with the better things of life. A tremendous flow, perfect in cadence, tops on my list

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Perry Biggerstaff 04 March 2014

Love it. I often come back her for inspiration. Thank you,

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Sandra Feldman 04 March 2014

All I can say is GREAT! Very Impressed! ! ! Perfect balance, perfect style And the thoughts are sure worth while, You're Impressions, they will last, For their greatness is so vast!

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Jitesh Shah 21 March 2014

beautiful nature's poem and also read my poem

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 06 March 2014

Nature's beauty, music, art, and poetry they all create lasting impressions. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

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Diane Hine 05 March 2014

Reading this is like watching a waterfall - exhilarating.

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Patricia Northall 05 March 2014

I like this very much. It speaks to me of happy memories that have left deep impressions thought of often. Very well written Valerie. Pat Northall

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Dave Walker 05 March 2014

A very beautiful poem, flows wonderfully throughout.

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