In Beauty Poem by Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie

In Beauty

Rating: 4.6


In beauty we dwell
Blooming stark from spring,
Who moves with flight,
Seasons the air
In our abode
Concrete as gleam
Novelised with boons
Built in rock-like base
To glow as Eden.
Our hands knitted
With bond fixed glue-like,
Rendered firm as steel.

Close as we nurture
Our hearts ring-mutual,
Like in the garden
To sprout as flowers free
To ascend and sing.
No how the earthquakes,
The volcanoes,
The hurricanes,
The tsunamis,
The forest fire,
Can ever sever
The cord of our love.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dorothy- A. Holmes 17 May 2015

A lovely verse as I stroll through your garden seeing and feeling as my senses are teased! A pleasure to read. Dorothy...A Poet Who Loves To Sing

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Mugano Paul 29 December 2009

TRULY NICE but the line that says 'Can ever sever The cord of our love' causes me to disagree. In this riot, i pray that nothing ever breaks the cord of love in the mighty name of Jesus. Time has come to have the right foundations of the GODLY institution built on the solid ROCK; Jesus. How is this my dear? B the way do you ever read any of my poems?

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Kasthuri Velu 16 November 2009

Nice poem.........well written.

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Janae Lagge 28 October 2009

That is very pretty! Keep it up! :)

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Rex Mathew Mathew 24 October 2009

The poem delivers a very romantic and creative view on love. It is wonderful how you can uncover love and fantasy out of nature. Nice imagery. Nice poem. I like your style.

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Bernard Snyder 29 September 2015

I must say this is very different, yet just as beautiful. Great job!

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 September 2015

Novelised with boons! With the muse of love and life. Nice work.

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Ramesh T A 29 September 2015

Love will surpass all hurdles when it blooms strong!

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Ovi Odiete 29 September 2015

This is a beautiful poem about Love..

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Anil Kumar Panda 29 September 2015

Nicely done. Love will exist for ever.

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