Darkness... has drowned my heart
It's darker, more than night ever be
Darkness... has consumed my strength, smile fading...
When I realized everything around me turn into memories
In seconds (Just in seconds){voice echoes}
**Instrumental**
Will you ever understand
When everything you have now turn into memories just in seconds
Will you ever understand what I'm telling you(you cant)
....Because thousands of words cant touch the depth
....Let only I summarize all in each tear that falling
....Let only I explain to you this way, let me
Tell me,
How far the distance between my heart and heaven
I guess, it takes my last breath to reach you there
Till then my heart in the darkness, darker than night ever be
All the memories will always be the fullest moon
to brighten, to heal...me
Though my mind forgets
My heart will remind
Will you ever understand
When every face you have seen now gone
Will you ever understand in seconds they just memories(you cant)
....Because thousands of words cant touch the depth
....Let only i summarize all in each tears that falling
....Let only i explain to you this way, let me
Though my mind convinced not to remember
My heart refused to let it go
**soft instrumental*
Now passing time has consumed my breaths
Im slowly closer to end the distance
Everytime my heart beats, i remember
Even if mind refused to
I'll remember{soft tones}
I'll remember{ whispering}
Hi friend, how are you! Yes, you delivered. A tear. A thought. And a beat. At a time. Tear is absolute. And mind can't understand, this is the only way. Heart can never skip the pain, to be suffered. Very nice poem. Best wishes
Hi dear, i am fine...Thank you for your time and kind words, really appreciate your time to read my work. sorry i cant write better to serve but your words really kind.
A great work, Soul. I can hear these lyrics played to a number of beats. Excellent verse, Soul!
Part - 2 I love most lines are....Will you ever understand / When every face you have seen now gone / Will you ever understand in seconds they just memories(you cant) /....Because thousands of words cant touch the depth /....Let only i summarize all in each tears that falling /....Let only i explain to you this way, let me.... Great work really. Full vote.
Part - 1 Your intention to write with different version, different languages reflects in this poem clearly. Considering two version..one is darker and another one is bright version, you have posted here the former version i, e this poem. The story inspired by an Middle east man how he lost all of his family members, parents and relative in one incident in Iraq makes you to create this beautiful poem in a new style. I appreciate the way of your presentation.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
What a wonderful poem excellently penned. Poignant yet beautiful song and when read it is mellifluous. Every fiber of this poem has been woven to touch the heart.