In Each Tear That Falling Poem by Unwritten Soul

In Each Tear That Falling

Rating: 5.0


Darkness... has drowned my heart
It's darker, more than night ever be
Darkness... has consumed my strength, smile fading...
When I realized everything around me turn into memories
In seconds (Just in seconds){voice echoes}

**Instrumental**

Will you ever understand
When everything you have now turn into memories just in seconds
Will you ever understand what I'm telling you(you cant)
....Because thousands of words cant touch the depth
....Let only I summarize all in each tear that falling
....Let only I explain to you this way, let me

Tell me,
How far the distance between my heart and heaven
I guess, it takes my last breath to reach you there
Till then my heart in the darkness, darker than night ever be
All the memories will always be the fullest moon
to brighten, to heal...me

Though my mind forgets
My heart will remind

Will you ever understand
When every face you have seen now gone
Will you ever understand in seconds they just memories(you cant)
....Because thousands of words cant touch the depth
....Let only i summarize all in each tears that falling
....Let only i explain to you this way, let me

Though my mind convinced not to remember
My heart refused to let it go

**soft instrumental*

Now passing time has consumed my breaths
Im slowly closer to end the distance
Everytime my heart beats, i remember
Even if mind refused to
I'll remember{soft tones}
I'll remember{ whispering}

Monday, July 29, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: death,dedication,emotions,expression,feeling,song,tragedy,war memories
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is one of my writings that i intended to write with different version, different languages. I will post the translation of different languages if someone helped me to translate in any language. I consider two version..one is darker (this version)another one is bright version (a hopeful)which i might post later. The story was inspired by an Middle east man that shared us a story of how he losing all of his family members, parents and relative in one incident in Iraq. Only him and his younger child survived. This scar left him sad and teared when he shared the story. Somebody suggest someone to write something for him to deliver his expression because they told me that he likes to sing...i thought it would be like this song it just...I looked at different aspects like what if an orphan that lost his/her whole family in the war or someone that lost everything suddenly...because it will be tribute to them too. So I tried to borrow the emotion while writing this though i never know how bad it felt inside them. but i really want us to remember that lets be kind to others that face hardness that we never know...so we can be kinder to other people without judging why like this and that. I dont mind if it not interest anybody but it just for personal value. Thanks for reading the notes until this long...hahhah. Thanks a lot
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 July 2019

What a wonderful poem excellently penned. Poignant yet beautiful song and when read it is mellifluous. Every fiber of this poem has been woven to touch the heart.

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Anjandev Roy 12 January 2020

Fabulous piece. anjandev roy.

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Muhammad Ali 22 November 2019

Hi friend, how are you! Yes, you delivered. A tear. A thought. And a beat. At a time. Tear is absolute. And mind can't understand, this is the only way. Heart can never skip the pain, to be suffered. Very nice poem. Best wishes

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Unwritten Soul 05 December 2019

Hi dear, i am fine...Thank you for your time and kind words, really appreciate your time to read my work. sorry i cant write better to serve but your words really kind.

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Mj Lemon 30 July 2019

A great work, Soul. I can hear these lyrics played to a number of beats. Excellent verse, Soul!

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Unwritten Soul 05 December 2019

Thank you so much MJ L :) :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 July 2019

Part - 2 I love most lines are....Will you ever understand / When every face you have seen now gone / Will you ever understand in seconds they just memories(you cant) /....Because thousands of words cant touch the depth /....Let only i summarize all in each tears that falling /....Let only i explain to you this way, let me.... Great work really. Full vote.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 July 2019

Part - 1 Your intention to write with different version, different languages reflects in this poem clearly. Considering two version..one is darker and another one is bright version, you have posted here the former version i, e this poem. The story inspired by an Middle east man how he lost all of his family members, parents and relative in one incident in Iraq makes you to create this beautiful poem in a new style. I appreciate the way of your presentation.

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