Return To The Sea Poem by Unwritten Soul

Return To The Sea

Rating: 4.9


Secret from the river
Carried by the endless waves
Flowing to return to the sea
And then hide in the ocean depth

As everybody feels happy and pain
So the innocence heart in us, just the same

Return to the sea
Listen the ballad of of waves
A confession in a song from sea
By the chanting bubbles of emotions
With the whispers in the ocean
Humming secret story from the depth
As this heart hide something in breath

Monday, August 25, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: self reflection
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terry Craddock 28 August 2014

This Secret from the river Carried by the endless waves is a secret I knew as a child summer living in rivers and the sea thus your lines By the chanting bubbles of emotions With the whispers in the ocean Humming secret story from the depth echo deep memories within my soul :) missed you and I have the honour of voting the first 10+ for you :) :) :)

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Hans Vr 26 August 2014

Soooo Beautifully written. A joy to read

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Simone Inez Harriman 25 July 2017

I love the image of the river transporting the secret back to the sea. How the timelessness of the ocean draws us when we are looking for healing or direction. Maybe it's the rhythmic waves and sureness of tides or simply soaking up the well-being of the sun lying on warm sand breathing in the sea air. A deserving 10 plus

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Unwritten Soul 26 July 2017

Simone, Thanks a lot for always be kind and make me smiling with your encouraging words... :) cant say it loud but Thanks :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 October 2018

Endless wave motivate mind to proceed ahead with dignity and beauty. A confession in a song from sea we hear through waves. Re-visiting this poem values more....10

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Hazel Durham 02 March 2018

Stunning write with beautiful imagery just so moving and deep as the ocean you vividly capture!

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Rebecca Navarre 17 August 2017

Ever So Deeply Moving This Poem Flows, Touching Hearts, Touching Souls! ! ! ! ! Carrying... /Under Gods Wings..! ! ! ! ! \ Thank You! ! ! ! ! Soul, Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many 10S! ! ! ! !

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 August 2017

Wonderful imaginary and imagery. Beautifully crafted. Return to the sea Listen the ballad of of waves A confession in a song from sea By the chanting bubbles of emotions Thanks for sharing. With the whispers in the ocean Humming secret story from the depth As this heart hide something in bre Thanks for sharing.

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Unwritten Soul 11 August 2017

Thank you :) hope you enjoy my poor work :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 August 2017

Wonderful imaginary and imagery. Beautifully crafted. Return to the sea Listen the ballad of of waves A confession in a song from sea By the chanting bubbles of emotions Thanks for sharing. With the whispers in the ocean Humming secret story from the depth As this heart hide something in bre

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