Unwritten Soul


Return To The Sea - Poem by Unwritten Soul

Secret from the river
Carried by the endless waves
Flowing to return to the sea
And then hide in the ocean depth

As everybody feels happy and pain
So the innocence heart in us, just the same

Return to the sea
Listen the ballad of of waves
A confession in a song from sea
By the chanting bubbles of emotions
With the whispers in the ocean
Humming secret story from the depth
As this heart hide something in breath

Topic(s) of this poem: self reflection


Comments about Return To The Sea by Unwritten Soul

  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (10/4/2018 6:29:00 AM)

    Endless wave motivate mind to proceed ahead with dignity and beauty. A confession in a song from sea we hear through waves. Re-visiting this poem values more....10 (Report)Reply

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  • Hazel DurhamHazel Durham (3/2/2018 7:15:00 AM)

    Stunning write with beautiful imagery just so moving and deep as the ocean you vividly capture! (Report)Reply

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  • Rebecca NavarreRebecca Navarre (8/17/2017 11:07:00 PM)

    Ever So Deeply Moving This Poem Flows, Touching Hearts,
    Touching Souls! ! ! ! ! Carrying... /Under Gods Wings..! ! ! ! ! \ Thank You! ! ! ! !
    Soul, Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many 10S! ! ! ! !
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  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (8/11/2017 3:44:00 AM)

    Wonderful imaginary and imagery. Beautifully crafted.

    Return to the sea
    Listen the ballad of of waves
    A confession in a song from sea
    By the chanting bubbles of emotions
    Thanks for sharing.
    With the whispers in the ocean
    Humming secret story from the depth
    As this heart hide something in bre

    Thanks for sharing.
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    Unwritten SoulUnwritten Soul(8/11/2017 7:48:00 AM)

    Thank you :) hope you enjoy my poor work :)

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  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (8/11/2017 3:16:00 AM)

    Wonderful imaginary and imagery. Beautifully crafted.

    Return to the sea
    Listen the ballad of of waves
    A confession in a song from sea
    By the chanting bubbles of emotions
    Thanks for sharing.
    With the whispers in the ocean
    Humming secret story from the depth
    As this heart hide something in bre
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  • Simone Inez Harriman (7/25/2017 11:26:00 PM)

    I love the image of the river transporting the secret back to the sea. How the timelessness of the ocean draws us when we are looking for healing or direction. Maybe it's the rhythmic waves and sureness of tides or simply soaking up the well-being of the sun lying on warm sand breathing in the sea air. A deserving 10 plus (Report)Reply

    Unwritten SoulUnwritten Soul(7/26/2017 5:51:00 AM)

    Simone, Thanks a lot for always be kind and make me smiling with your encouraging words... :) cant say it loud but Thanks :)

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  • Sally Plumb Plumb (7/14/2017 2:09:00 AM)

    Lost at sea. ..... drifting in words. Good piece. (Report)Reply

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  • Adilson PintoAdilson Pinto (7/13/2017 2:00:00 PM)

    For sure a poetical and philosophical poem - beautiful! ! ! From the Eternal we came, to Him we will come back! Hugs from Brazil dear poet and friend! (Report)Reply

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  • Mj Lemon (7/12/2017 11:17:00 PM)

    Terrific imagery, Soul. There is something about this work that evokes the thought of a journey home, or a journey back to a point or time of origin. The music and musicality reinforces that. Do we not respond to melodies because, like the flowing waters, they return us to something familiar? A great work, Soul. (Report)Reply

    Unwritten SoulUnwritten Soul(7/13/2017 12:01:00 PM)

    Thank you dear Mj Lemon for being here as a sailer, im happy you enjoy panorama in your thought after reading this poetry, your kind words and joining my poetry exploration are the wind to keep the flow goes smoothly... Thank u dearly from me

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  • Edward Kofi LouisEdward Kofi Louis (8/29/2016 10:50:00 AM)

    Listen to the ballad of the waves! Thanks for sharing. (Report)Reply

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  • Dr Tony BrahminDr Tony Brahmin (5/25/2016 4:12:00 AM)

    Return to the sea
    Listen the ballad of of waves
    A confession in a song from sea
    By the chanting bubbles of emotions...... beautiful lines, i liked it very much..... self reflection leads you to poetic heights. thank you dear poetess. tony
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  • Aranthabailu UmmarAranthabailu Ummar (8/14/2015 7:14:00 AM)

    If I touch your first linesecret from the river it is our imagination of silent flow. Because river will flow silently without producing any noise. We can listen its melodious rhythms when there is no external noise or voice from its bank. So the secret of the river is a imagination. From the imagination it may be any thing. It depends on the feeling of the person how he feels it. And it makes some sound when we looks in to 2nd line of your poem.Carried by the endless waves.

    To be continued.....
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  • Aranthabailu UmmarAranthabailu Ummar (8/14/2015 6:21:00 AM)

    Hi Soul, Mubarak for the day.
    Again will show a bad dare to write on this poem for the first stanzas of it
    1. Secret from the river
    2. Carried by the endless wave
    3. Flowing to return to the sea
    4. And then hide in the ocean depth.
    From a first look we may think each lines have connecting to one by one
    But if I peep deep in to it is not
    in other cross it may have links
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  • * Sunprincess * (3/18/2015 7:27:00 PM)

    ......beautiful imagery and a most lovely poem....reminds me of the epic story the Odyssey....love this one soul....and congratulations on member poem :) (Report)Reply

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  • Kim BarneyKim Barney (3/18/2015 6:25:00 PM)

    I checked out your biography and you don't say where you are from, but I think I can safely assume from your sentence structures that English is not your native language. Nevertheless, your poem has some good thoughts and leaves me with a pleasant feeling. Congratulations on having the poem selected as Poem of the Day! (Report)Reply

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  • Godfrey MorrisGodfrey Morris (3/18/2015 5:59:00 PM)

    This is a beautiful your pen did justice in writing this poem. (Report)Reply

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  • Aftab Alam KhursheedAftab Alam Khursheed (3/18/2015 11:50:00 AM)

    Very strong and beautiful poem and congratulation my friend US (Report)Reply

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  • Lyn PaulLyn Paul (3/18/2015 7:42:00 AM)

    My favourite place. There are so many answers in the sea. Love your soothing words. (Report)Reply

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  • Rekha Mandagere (12/16/2014 10:37:00 PM)

    The title of the poem just took me back to my ester years of studenthood. It reminded me of one of the act plays 'The Riders to the Sea' by an Irish writer Synge portrays deep sufferings of a mother who sacrifices her sons one after other to the sea. (Report)Reply

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  • Rekha Mandagere (12/16/2014 10:27:00 PM)

    Nice imagery and matured expression of human suffering in rhymes! (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 25, 2014

Poem Edited: Tuesday, September 9, 2014


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