Unwritten Soul

A Letter In The Wind - Poem by Unwritten Soul

Yellow foliage fallen on my hands
Remind me, they once were green
Reminisce me of our beautiful time
Standing here, witnessing running days
Flying and leaving that moment away
So soon days changing another season,
But I know our time wont be faded away
Even it only just golden past days

Encarved smiles by those memories
Haunting clock ticking, bringing old times,
Staying alive, In a distance of silence
Presently living between our breaths
Far by the oceans, across the lands
Two minds bind to different poles of hearts
Between us, joining two souls, you and me
The only junction connecting us over the sea
Maybe i am the only one who counting
Upon the days till you are here to return
Chasing the time toward the end
To end the season of waiting

Since you been gone,
Day by day I'm living with the sky
Looking the same sun, hope it warming you
Staring the moon bright, hope it shelters your night
Your last promise to return, I am undone the last bye
I shall await, await for your shadow to tell me you're back
But spring has losing it flowers, and leaves about to leave
Evening breeze of autumn, I still living with the sunset sky
It could be another day of waiting, but i am loyal to stay
So in each breathe i take in, my soul write my words
Chaining word by word, embroidered with my prayers
A single hush flying with a letter from my all
Swifting free, those are my letters in the wind

Wandering in this shared world atmosphere
Bird singing over the melodies, tunes of harmony
Singing verses of secret letter hidden in the wind
Encompassed by your magnetic heart, it will find
From a single hush traveled to be in your breathing
May it'll be revealed when reach to heart then your mind
A letter to words then completing the meaning
Binding to your mind of what i am here telling
My whispering soul to you, if you wondering

Below the stars, the shining sparks
Sometimes i feel someone is remembering me
Could it be a reply for me, my letter in the wind?
Take nothing for granted, the only thing i honestly mean
Only praying for you having all great life and things
Maybe this waiting is not going to end
But my prayers will never stop to send
And the letters will be continuously written
In each of my breathing, every second
Till the last breath of my life

Stand here, watching how green turn yellow
and that's how it was our beautiful time
For life has time with mystery flow
Remind you never be low, just go
Trust all things within you
Be strong whatever you do
I am not be there but the wind will
Carrying a letter for you
from me till end of my time

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The alternate title for this poem is called 'Une lettre dans le vent'. Taking many times before posting this poem, then i done two artworks for it one is called Autumn on my skin, and Eternal spring. Written for a far relative, my french teacher, my friend that i always enjoyed together in thick and thin, start written when my nice buddy had to go to work in Algeria, for few months. I am just hoping you doing well and always be strong and be happy, my best far relative and friend_Unwritten Soul

Topic(s) of this poem: relationship, seasons

Comments about A Letter In The Wind by Unwritten Soul

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (8/15/2017 7:05:00 AM)

    Sorry, please read ' marvellous' instead of 'marvdlous'. It has been inadvertently done. (Report) Reply

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (8/7/2017 9:17:00 AM)

    So beautiful and imagery. Heart touching depiction. Stunning expression. Above all a marvdlous poem. (Report) Reply

  • Simone Inez Harriman (8/7/2017 12:06:00 AM)

    WOW.....I am so knocked-out stunned at this beautifully penned poem. I shed tears reading this true masterpiece as your poem resonates with the sadness in my soul......I have known well the heartache from that distance and separation from the ones you love. Straight to my favorites. (Report) Reply

    Unwritten Soul (8/7/2017 7:30:00 AM)

    What should i say, and what i say here maybe less than what is the thing i really want to say to you...Thank you, although i know i have limited way of writing and expressing, but to know someone feel and appreciate my feeling and how i converted it in poetry..it just makes me feel stronger and feel worth it to express..i feel free...and you kindness gave all to this feeling, thanks Simone...Always make me feel fine, you deserve the best my dear friend

  • Hazel Durham (6/26/2017 5:03:00 AM)

    Such intense beauty of your words spilling with emotions onto the page with incredible imagery and a superb write! ! (Report) Reply

  • Cheryl Tutaan (6/1/2017 1:32:00 PM)

    A heart-touching, well written poem...I love the flow of emotions and words...Thank you for sharing, Soul...❤ (Report) Reply

    Unwritten Soul (6/4/2017 2:41:00 AM)

    Again and again thanks to you :) You are one of soothing word in the wind..telling smile to wherever you lay on surface/people :)

  • Edward Kofi Louis (11/17/2016 7:17:00 AM)

    Reminiscence! Watching and waiting; with the muse of the melodies of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report) Reply

  • Rebecca Navarre (10/9/2016 7:53:00 PM)

    Very Heartfelt! ! ! Touching Poem! Beautifully done! Grateful You shared! (Report) Reply

  • Robert Murray Smith (10/9/2016 6:48:00 AM)

    A nice poem. Thank you.
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  • (8/17/2016 2:55:00 PM)

    A letter... in the wind. A twinkle, in the globe... the globe of tear! A praying honest heart. Beauty of true relationship is all this poem. (Report) Reply

  • (6/5/2016 12:24:00 PM)

    Artful use if words and phrase... Very descriptive. Please post the artwork you did about it. (Report) Reply

  • (5/9/2016 9:14:00 AM)

    Yes, another very moving poem with an unerring sense of rhythm. It contains many beautiful thoughts expressed with great artistry. Glad I found you!
    Tom Billsborough
    Ps No you found me first! A big bonus for me.
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  • Heather Wilkins (8/11/2013 8:41:00 PM)

    this is a beautiful write. the last stanza a delight to write. enjoyed the write (Report) Reply

  • (7/3/2013 12:27:00 AM)

    Luvli poem indeed 'from me till end of my time, luvli all the way thru will read many times...excuse the luvli spelling its Yorkshire slang! which is said with deep meaning. regards (Report) Reply

  • (4/5/2013 12:01:00 PM)

    You have a unique, extremely pleasing style.
    Wonderful, Soul!
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  • Vivek Tiwari (1/8/2013 10:48:00 AM)

    A rare but excellent piece. Goodly expressed. (Report) Reply

  • Colin Bradley (1/1/2013 12:14:00 AM)

    beautifully written excellent (Report) Reply

  • Jahan Zeb (12/14/2012 7:34:00 AM)

    Looking the same sun, hope it warming you
    Staring the moon bright, hope it shelters your night.

    This is undoubtedly a spectacular write and I enjoyed it very very much. I liked the thought in every part of this artistic piece. The best thing I saw and read in this piece is the wonderful imagination in it. the idea of getting sunlight from the sun looking at the moon for it is sheltering your friend.

    But you know I got relief to see that you do have a friend. Marvelous. Unwritten Soul
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  • (12/11/2012 7:36:00 AM)

    Awesomely beautiful! A sure fire 10 if it would only let me enter ratings. (Report) Reply

  • (11/30/2012 2:12:00 PM)

    This poem is absolutely beautiful! ! ! ^^ i could read your poems all day (Report) Reply

  • Vipins Puthooran (11/30/2012 3:42:00 AM)

    [a feeling of melancholy, shows intense and absolute love of companionship]
    Great poem my soul....
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 25, 2012

Poem Edited: Thursday, August 18, 2016

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