In Finding Self Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

In Finding Self

Rating: 4.5


Now I live in cold fogs city
Walk alone to seek inner light
In mind, I'm full of mystery
Now I live in cold fogs city
Who comes to find whose entity
I find myself in my own sight
Now I live in cold fogs city
Walk alone to seek inner light

-14.12.2020 Chattogam

Monday, December 14, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: introspection
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Triolet, (Middle French: "clover leaf")medieval French verse form that consists of eight short lines rhyming ABaAabAB. The first line is repeated in the fourth and seventh lines and the second line is also the last line (the capital letters indicate repeating lines) . The name TRIOLET is taken from the three repetitions of the first line.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Britte Ninad 27 January 2021

Now I live in cold fogs city Walk alone to seek inner light ~nice triolet

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Bernard F. Asuncion 17 December 2020

A well authored poem.... Truly excellent....5 stars *****

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Lyn Paul 15 December 2020

Valuable words captured in this triolet.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 14 December 2020

u have b too much theory why not read me as did once dearly its cold so now u don't miss oldie i can tho blind mb of bd c

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Varsha M 14 December 2020

This is really resplendid. Beautifully penned. Nice to see a new poetic form.

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