In My Dreams-❤️ Poem by M. Asim Nehal

In My Dreams-❤️

Rating: 5.0


You sing a lullaby for me,
I shall dream about you
On the silvery moonbeams
Falling through cotton candy of translucent sky

Carrying you on a chariot of wind
To the crystal blue lagoon
Where the golden bow and
A quiver of silver arrows
Awaits to shoot the arrow of love

From the galley of past
We shall see the future smiling
On the lunar luminescence of glory
At the purple arched sky
Where eyes turn to a kaleidoscope

Before the dawn breaks the clouds
And birds sing aloud
And Sun starts crimson journey
Darkness of Edenic Earth vanishes
Let us swim in the sea of Love.

In My Dreams-❤️
Saturday, August 22, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: dream
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 22 August 2020

In My Dreams-❤️.....Falling through cotton candy of translucent sky Awaits to shoot the arrow of love. Darkness of Edenic earth vanishes Let us swim in the sea of Love. That's truly dreamy Asim Sir! how appealing to read this cutest crystal clearly conveyed composition, Asim Sir! I have enjoyed enormously. A 100++++! ! your dreamy mind and the scintillating result. Thank you so much for sharing.

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T Rajan Evol 24 August 2020

Thoughtful lind: From the galley of past We shall see the future smiling On the lunar luminescence of glory At the purple arched sky Where eyes turn to a kaleidoscope

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Bwangwa Yukoshu 25 August 2020

I seldom gets the dream they are elusive of me. Please come to me and show some rosy things. Like you show it to poets.

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Zuzu Mutairi 22 August 2020

Soothing poem. Dreamscape lovely recreated.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 August 2020

In dream the arrow of love carries the past and future and love blooms in wonderful way. Before breaking of dawn birds and clouds sing and we hear nice chirping sound all around us. Beautiful mind motivates us and we feel the dignity of natural integrity. You have rightly perceived nature. All of us should swim in sea of love. This poem is excellently penned...10

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Indira Renganathan 10 March 2024

Full of love....lovely love poem....liked

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 25 November 2022

Asim I really just love it

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Beautiful poem. The aurora of the glory of life is enchanting. Top score, sir

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 24 November 2022

Wonderful Poem Asim ji.' Let us swim into the sea of love ' Thank you so much dear Poet. So glad to see you back in PH after a while.

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Zoyza Da Vinka 25 June 2021

Fantastic dream. Nice work.

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