This crying sky shares pain with me
And this dancing tree shares its joy
That tall mountain shares its wealth
And playing ocean shares its breath
And this flying birds, share their time
Fallen leafs, share their color with me
And withered flower shares its smile
Rotten fruit shares its hope with me
And deserted dry tree shares its shade
And blowing breeze, shares its folds
Far rising sun, shares its day with me
And beautiful moon shares its night
Glowing star shares its dream with me
And that shooting star shares its wish
And the cloud, shares its name with me
World of mine shares its meal with me
And that world of his shares its light
This quill of mine shares heart with me
And this sheet of white shares its life
And my loneliness shares, peace with me
This shows a positive outlook to a solitary person who minds not the place full of negative objects.
This shows a positive outlook to a solitary person who minds not the place full of negative objects.
Good write But sometimes it's better to be alone there are rotten ppl out there... thank u
Takes all types to make a world, alone is only one state of being. Though with GOD your never alone.
i like your poem! it seems we're in lined with one milieu... LONELINESS this poem has a comparison to my poem life in isolation maybe, i could relate to your vehements!
wonderful poem, it is practically an indestructible connection between the human being and the nature...lovely to read 10/10
wonderful one, i really liked it: D loneliness is the hardest feeling ever, i was sufering this feling before, but thanks God i dont feel loneliness now as i used too. sometimes we feel lonelimess even if we have a big family hope u happy life. thanks.
You are with so many things and how come loneliness is present. Solitude might be a more proper word. The poem is a bit abstract and takes time to comprehend.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
‘…Rotten fruit shares its hope with me…’ This is the most beauteous spot where I’m glued…indeed fantastic…genius …gestate… Voted 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK