In My World Poem by Mashiur Rahman

In My World

Rating: 5.0


In my World, Everyone will eat
Everyone will get clothes
Everyone will have a house to stay
In my world, Everyone will have equal rights
There will be many types of opinion
But no one will despise anyone
No one will neglect anyone
Everyone will love everyone
There will be no war on my earth
People will not kill people.
Everyone will love everyone.
Everyone will respect everyone.
My World will be a garden.

@Mashiur Rahman

Tuesday, January 12, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: world
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varsha M 13 January 2021

Yes this world looks beautiful....but to make this world exsist we need to think on different lines not those very old one....if we can do this new world awaits us. Good poetry.

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Mashiur Rahman 15 January 2021

Thank you

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Susan Williams 13 January 2021

A beautiful world! ! ! If God hadn't given us freedom of choice, that would be the world we live in. Sigh.

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Unnikrishnan E S 13 January 2021

This is the world I wish to live in. Lovely poem.5 stars

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Phillip Nine Mafunga 26 June 2022

I would love to be a citizen of your world!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 25 April 2022

A wonderful depiction of a perfect world, Utopia. I hope in God's own time we can achieve a world like paradise. A well thought out poem.

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Chinedu Dike 18 March 2021

Fine and lofty thoughts nicely brought forth with clarity of thought and mind.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 26 February 2021

This is a most peaceful world without poverty or hungry inhabitants. I am mesmerised! I have enjoyed this lovely poem with the most caring content.5 Stars!

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Captain Cur 22 February 2021

An earthly paradise would be your world. A wonderful poem with a beautiful message.

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Mashiur Rahman

Mashiur Rahman

Naogaon, Bangladesh
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