In Such A Pensive Mood Poem by Indira Renganathan

In Such A Pensive Mood

Rating: 4.2


Every evening when the sun sets
A pensive mood sets in me
Reminding me of my nearing end
Such a moody instant- a sudden pop up
A poem of mine came to appease me-
'Ma cheer up, you should live long
Should birth more of my siblings
Be not moody, say o.k ma'..'o.k'
Then I said 'why me alone? '
'I want you and all to live long'
'Long Live My Poem Kids' I wished

Thursday, November 17, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: wish
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharati Nayak 25 November 2016

Wow- - a fine poem- - Long live poetess and her poem kinds.I have also written a poem in this light.If you find time please read my poem- Shall I Wait Till I understand Pablo Neruda

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Edward Kofi Louis 23 November 2016

Mood; to live long. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 November 2016

'In Such A Pensive Mood' is a heartfelt poem related to Nature. It has been so nicely presented.....10

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Siddartha Montik 19 November 2016

So in with the elements and the nature to get into that moodiness.. expresses that you are almost in tune with the Nature! Lovely Penning!

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M Asim Nehal 17 November 2016

At times we all tend to go moody and it's a part of life, Nicely written...10

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