Jessica Elizondo

Rookie - 0 Points (September 30,1991 / Wooster)

In The Box, Under My Bed - Poem by Jessica Elizondo

Am I crazy?
Or crazy in love?
Your so flawless,
So perfect through my eyes.

When you look me in the eyes,
I blush and turn around.
Your eyes are too beautiful for my eyes to gaze at
And your smile makes me melt.

Your hugs are so warm
I feel safe in your arms.
But sadly to you,
they're just friendly hugs, nothing more.

Oh my dear how I wish you knew.
You have me so in love
I only ask one thing,
to know the you love me too?

Well will you ever know?
My love, in the box under my bed
is a letter that I don't know will get read,
But one day I swear that your beautiful eyes will look apon it

I know we're friends,
But can't we be something more?
Your the only guy, that I can be myself around,
The one that I love.

So on that faithful day,
when I open the box, and take out the letter,
I hope you will read it with care.
Because not only does the letter have my feelings on it, it has my heart.

Comments about In The Box, Under My Bed by Jessica Elizondo

  • (12/17/2009 8:59:00 PM)

    Aaaaaaaahhhhhh... The feeling of longing love. How I know it all too well. Very wonderfully said, and you capture the feeling as if it were a prisoner of war. I give it a 10. (Report) Reply

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  • (9/16/2008 8:17:00 PM)

    A boxed heart
    that is new to me
    I wonder
    if the box is enough to protect
    keep it close to your heart always.

    such a sweet thing my heart feels from you
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  • (6/25/2008 7:51:00 PM)

    wow! ! ! ! that line i put in my poem, you lead the most distinguished poet is a understaitment......i love this poem....10/10 (Report) Reply

  • (6/25/2008 7:47:00 PM)

    A very sincere and enchanting poem. (Report) Reply

  • Evaughn Gray (6/25/2008 7:39:00 PM)

    wow that's good..nice feelings u let out.~Hazel (Report) Reply

  • (6/25/2008 7:24:00 PM)

    aww its so sweet. i love the last line. very well done. excellent! ! (Report) Reply

  • (6/25/2008 7:21:00 PM)

    Let me know the out come...=].....very lovetastic (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 25, 2008

Poem Edited: Wednesday, June 25, 2008

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