In The Profundity Of Her Eyes Poem by Aarzoo Mehek

In The Profundity Of Her Eyes

Rating: 5.0


In the profundity of her eyes
Grey dark mystical clouds
Holding the weight of tears
Overwhelming sprinkle of storms
Holding back to spill it out
On the parched souls
With it's mourn of troubles
Biting the dust to share the
Implicit expressions of torment.


© Aarzoo Mehek

In The Profundity Of Her Eyes
Thursday, August 13, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: expressions,proficiency,rain,storm
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 13 August 2020

The sad tale of a wounded heart - nicely described by the profundity of her eyes....I wonder what weight those tears must have carried. Loved it 100++

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 July 2022

A poignant poem... liked it.5 stars

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 14 August 2020

A deep sublime soulful muse! A great poem in brevity! Kudos! Plz do read and comment your thoughts on my newest prose titled, " face veils/face masks same thing " as it fosters an understanding of the shared veiling practice btw east and west since history. I have received comments for it in my inbox though they don't show up under my poem yet.

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Prem Nizar Hameed 14 August 2020

A parched soul needs to be moistened. Excellent, Aarzoo.

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Rajnish Manga 13 August 2020

'eyes.... Holding the weight of tears' have the potential to work up a tempest but more often than naught it is suppressed or withheld to preclude the possibility of any trouble in one's relationships. Thank you very much for sharing this profound poem.

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Mahtab Bangalee 13 August 2020

In the deep field of eyes The sadness of separation Cultivating the tears..... Loneliness

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