...In The Valley Of My Mind Poem by Eyan Desir

...In The Valley Of My Mind

Rating: 4.1


I carry black roses
Of what that has been
Rain drops wet my floor
To many cold night
Days of unfairness
I smell her fragrant
I awake to find this
In the valley of my mind

I hear the wedding bells
I see a wedding ring
Her kisses wet my lips
I see her smiling face
I hold her to find it's
In the valley of my mind

The rain drops has dried
I'm happy I can smile
Because I realize
I can get her back
Any time I want to
In the valley of my mind


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plublish work of Eyan Desir

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lynda Robson 08 May 2009

Nice write Eyan, the valley of the mind is capable of anything, 10 Lynda xx

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Patricia Dashwood 08 May 2009

romantic..more verses please

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Rajaram Ramachandran 07 May 2009

A loveable desire in the valley of the poet's mind.

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Goran Gustafsson 07 May 2009

The bottom line is that what we call reality is a kind of fiktion composed of our brain/mind. Nice romantic writing.

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Roshni D'Souza 07 May 2009

Nice read...touching and melancholic in a way! I like the idea of the black roses.

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Howard Kern 17 May 2009

very ethereal keep on plugin!

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Obinna Eruchie 16 May 2009

pain and pleasure in the mind of love lost. the poem has a good imagery.

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 12 May 2009

In the valley of my mind - beautiful Eyan...where precious moments, even after the pain, can be stored....

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Linda Ori 08 May 2009

The mind is a powerful thing. If not for hopes and dreams, we would never attempt anything. You make the choices that define your life - 'in the valley of your mind'. Nice write, Eyan Linda :)

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Joseph Poewhit 08 May 2009

The mind really has unlimited potentials

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