kanav justa

Veteran Poet - 1,531 Points (Shimla)

In Those Moments - Poem by kanav justa

As I close my eyes when I am alone
To understand the thoughts of mind
Thoughts like seeds which once were sown
As days of my life I rewind

ache my soul only to find
to seek answers of question hard
About friends enemies or beings unkind
Who shattered my own boulevard
Only for a moment though
More wiser than the pope I think
sourness of this pitiless world
Like a prize of wine I merrily drink

We only are good, when we try to think
At times inside we try to look
Like a drowning ship that time does sink
That fades away like a waning brook
We curse ourselves for sins we did
And think of bad what others do
Unhuman traits in those moment hid
That seeks for life for us anew

Life that’s clean, where we are good
Where friends are loved so are our foes
Where we know we have understood
Secret of love that slowly grows

To heavan, those moments they link
When eyes are clean, clear is the view
But it does not matter what we think
The things that counts are the things we do

Sadly those moments when die
The pleasant self of us is gone
We tend to forget the things we learned
Hatred seeds once more are sown

Comments about In Those Moments by kanav justa

  • Lyn Paul (11/30/2013 6:47:00 AM)

    Ache my soul only to find What great words. Love this write. (Report) Reply

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  • Geetha Jayakumar (11/21/2013 1:16:00 AM)

    Poem with in-depth meaning. Self assessment is very good. There is nothing better that judging self.
    Loved reading it Kanav. Thanks for this beautiful write.
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  • Queeny Gona (11/16/2013 6:26:00 AM)

    In-depth read and sounds very philosophical dear poet pal. (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilkins (11/15/2013 6:04:00 PM)

    it does not matter what we think the things that counts is the things we do lovely thought and so true. (Report) Reply

  • (11/14/2013 2:19:00 PM)

    its not the year or month or day we should count its the moments that should get counted by us cause we live them the most in past in future and now.... bravo sir (Report) Reply

  • Hazel Durham (11/14/2013 9:27:00 AM)

    To solve our own actions and mixed up feelings of pain that is all so real, when friends fail us, we then fail ourselves, by allowing their negativity to consume us and destroy our joy and to look at the world with wonder and love in our hearts to give the best of ourselves is all we can do!
    Loved this deep and powerful write!
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  • (11/14/2013 5:38:00 AM)

    Introspection is a good quality to who ourselves with honestly. The many forces in our life's journey need consideration for the whole of our lives. (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (11/14/2013 12:24:00 AM)

    Self introspection leads to self correction and renewal! The tragedy of human life is the absence of love! When our hearts are filled with love, peace and joy emanate! But as we are frail, again hatred and jealousy, pride and arrogance find their way to our hearts! Repeated efforts for renewal can leave us good human beings! Enjoyed your poem, Kanav! (Report) Reply

  • (11/14/2013 12:02:00 AM)

    very good poem
    real pictures from life
    But it does not matter what we think
    The things that counts are the things we do
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  • Aftab Alam Khursheed (11/13/2013 8:36:00 AM)

    Ongoing human tragedy/calamities are well depicted though this poem a lovely write thank you Kanav God bless you (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 13, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, November 13, 2013

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