Inwaiting. Poem by Bharati Nayak

A fascinating poem! Delightful poetic expression filled with poetic beauty beckoning a sweet promise of love! I liked the third stanza most.........................10

Superb poem on hope, When waiting period is too long we all tend to think otherwise and the end is awesome where the hope has reached to its ultimate and promise takes over.....Amusing 10++++++++++

I will be surprised! ! ! Love and art! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Lovely poem..love is waiting for the union

Hi Bharati, Very poignant poem.. Waiting is very painful, but at the same time equally pleasant, as each moment of waiting is pregnant with hope of reunion and expectation. You have expressed this with profound emotions..

very good suspense will he ever come but hopes remain in GOD'S DOMAIN may be he will change his mind and come GOD BLESS YE O POETESS well done

Waiting for a loved one though he did not come but love makes one still hopeful. A nice picture of human sentiments.

Good poem and thanks to share it.impressive work and we'll penned.

'Promise me To stand by my side And hold my hands Before I melt into the fading light At the horizon's end. '..is a the most beautiful stanza here. Emotionally powerful poem. Loved the simple way you have spilled your feelings.10+++

A nice write...... . ..... Naila