~ INAESTHETIC GLOBAL POLLUTION ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
18 March 18,2010.
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WHY READ THIS:
We need moral, aesthetic, biblio, audio, visual over all soul’s sanitization. It’s important and urgent and must be regarded as ‘Must Dos’.
I’m grateful to Respected Sr. Hon’ble Poet Dr. Subbhendu Kar for giving me kind permission to club this relevant comment with this poem.
Readers are requested to contemplate and excogitate this comment and give PH a soignée, suave, and tidy ambience and genius loci for humane face, 'mutual amour propre' and debonair outfit as the commentator like many expressed deep anguish and concern ~ niv
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Dr.subhendu Kar (3/19/2010 3: 48: 00 PM)
to one of the stunning rejoinder as i would like to express my displeasure by the unsavory, disgruntled yet heinous demeanor as when one faces at times while trudging on the path of day today life irrespective of any place, people, cast, creed or gender consideration,
yes of course that was there in stone age in most wild way in deep forest and we gradually evolved to a most refined homo sapiens because by the greater virtue of education, knowledge, wisdom, yet braced up by more rationality as on today by twenty first century,
but shockingly we still we find certain wild traits still inherent in certain species of mankind which is when most rueful yet stark appalling fact,
but by advent genetic science and the modern bio-technological tools it has been quite pregnant with possibility to clone a living organism or to alter undesired characteristics in man or any living organism even any kind of disease/ insanity in human population
according to desired characteristics scientist are in a way of progress to clone man of superb qualities for greater benevolence of society to make our posterity stable and disease free to a most unbelievable extent by completion of Human genome project and of course complete human gene mapping, it has been quite possible to locate the undesired gene or defunct leading to dysfunction of cell physiology that causes constant aberration in health system, so any abberated man can be re pared
at the same time by applying the different modern techniques biotechnology say for example of Recombinant DNA Technology, scientist are in position to cure any kind abnormal disease, or psychology in human health system by gene therapy, even by taking the help DNA-chips replacement for appropriate gene requirement in a biological system to find the solution to our age old human psychosis in the niche of human health, administration crime and peace in the society
, yet time is not far off, where it would be possible to prepare our heavenly humankind by cutting edges of human genetics by solve the very mystery of any kind of cancer in social system of population by insanity,
and i do condemn this misdemeanor by personal mudslinging among ourselves in any form in this global village, thanks for sharing
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Why:
Many Lurid
Salacious Vulgarvermis
Lowinstinct Lunatics
Pampering Nurturing
Uncontrolled Libido Airing
Inaesthetic Global Pollution
The Psychopath Sadist
Uninhibited ID
On continuous
Contemplation Belowbeltline. [1]
Polluting Familylife
Streetlife Tubelfe
Malllife Internetlife
Clublife Bedroomlife
Officelife Ho-Life
In Hitlist Targetlist
We Women Are In. [2]
Like MadDogSyndrome
Libertinism Promiscuous
Ejecting Concocterotica
Concupiscence Lasciviousness
Uncontrolled Queasy Vile Eros. [3]
Viledroppings Thro’
Glanceogle Grimaceguile
Bibliowanton Voxvulgarity
Signsmut Carnal Elbowroomseeker. [4]
Hey Dear
Scientists… Geneticists
Doctors … Biochemists
Biotechnologist… Biologists
Wake up Get Started
Feel The Milieu.
Answer Us:
Women Are Victim
Mostly Rottenly Abysmally
Timeimmemorial Why Since?
Findout the Gene
Hey Scientists Brothers
Please….
Early Gestation
Gene Detection
Medico Sociopsychical
By Law Compulsion
Pregnancy Termination
Violent Demonlech
We'll Kibosh Coming
Smilingly Opt For Kidless Life.
Let Them
Not See Nascent Sun
Not Breath Pure Air
Not Feel Vibe Of Smileyflowers
Bathe In Lithe Rill.
Result: Women
Can Breathfreely
Expresses Aestheticvibes
Find Space …No Spycam
Walk Dignifiedly Fearlessly
Get… Give Pure Ambience
Emotional Exchange
For Paradigm Change.
We’ll Be Lovegivercarer
For Genteel Weather
Assuring You E’er
Civil Scoietymen
Nifty Planate Dweller
Please ponder
Findout Answer.
[An apology: Please don’t think me as a feminist …though we’re about 45% of world population …I’d the trauma by vile-lech personal attack and thro’ comment on my poems …also disfigured to satiate eros…and suffering still ~ niv]
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No apologies needed, where would we be without the ladies in our lives. You have said it masterfully and I enjoyed the read very much. Lynn
That’s the spirit… great Niv… great come back after trauma… just phew out … indeed this poem is like science fiction… may come true.. in near feature…as gene of many diseases are earmarked … where treatment is not possible better terminate coming the Demonlech….it’s great to free world from vile salacious…’zero-aesthetic’ ‘Vulgarvermis’…. Indeed they’re menace to our civilized society [let all women pledge like that] ….i hope if discovered the rate of women abuse [verbal...rape …etc] will come down…Inaesthetic pollution is more dangerous than.atmospheric pollution…what readers think… 10+++ AB London
Very much appropriate and in blatant way the Poet Protested …and it was needed… We readers must en masse come forward and join hands to flush out pollutants. Every word is loaded with power dynamite…explosive…to stir the phlegmatic so called peace seekers… A few quotes below: [1] Uninhibited ID /On continuous/Contemplation Belowbeltline’ – loves to stay and breed thoughts likewise [2] ‘In Hitlist Targetlist/We Women Are In’ – and a Perfect sure why why and why? [3] ‘Uncontrolled Queasy Vile Eros’ - They thrive on such psychic oxygen [4] ‘Pregnancy Termination’ – Where right gene has been flagged out …and kibosh seeing light of world [5] ‘Smilingly Opt For Kidless Life.’ – Out of desperation such resolution what a pity to civil societymen [6] ‘Find Space …No Spycam/Walk Dignifiedly Fearlessly’ – Desperate yearning for getting the fundamental rights. [7] ‘We’ll Be Lovegivercarer’ – Her [women in general] commitment and allegiance to human fraternity. I thank Poet for such a protesting and spine erect stand against all such unjust inflicted to women. Thanks for patience reading 10++ PS I thank all readers who came forward to protest specially Dr. Kar
World can never be completely sanitized from Inaesthetic Pollutions. Every amount of genetic engineering will prove futile. I’ve read comments and find all agree unanimously to curb all these. It was needed thru a process called Psychical ‘-Reconstruction-Engineering’ [PRE] Poem itself specks in favor of PRE. Indeed why since ageless time women folk are the prey? Let all walks of life stand together against such things. Pledge ‘We Can’ and ‘We Will’. Thanks all readers for standing against all bad comments against Poet Ms. Nivedita. 10++
Emotions run deep. Very reminiscent of the misguided nature of yesteryear when the slightest thing was confused and condoned. In regards to your other poem, I believe people focused too much on the title than the meaning of maintaining innocence. The great thing about poetry is the freedom of expression and this should always be maintained. Your piece clearly shows the impact of the pain of the last few weeks. Quite an interesting style of bombarding the reader with a shower of words both common and uncommon causing much when the main theme is well documented. The intensity is truly felt. A talented poet must remain to write.
A poem with a strong statement.The theme is well developed and sustained.10.
The crazy order of things and the crazy order of the world we live in. None lives the world in a buoyant state we found it in! Great write. Indeed this poem gets into the fabric of our culture today and what is sadly considered a norm. My prayer is that our must dos must remain our call to action. Nicely penned!
I just don't know what to say.I haven't the eloquence of some.
Hon’ble Poet Terence George Craddock I’m indeed feeling relived again that you voiced against such ‘Foulmouthed’ … ‘Vilemouthed’…’Vilebulimic’…and many many thanks by all hearts… Total sanitization is not possible …but such ‘Motormouthed’ persons must be shown Red Card [read ‘Red Eyes’]…to flush out them from the Tournament of Poetry for a fair play not a foul play. Thanks you again for sensing a woman’s trauma Kindest regards I’m indebtedly yours niv - Copy to: Hon’ble Poet Terence George Craddock
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The Psychopath Sadist Uninhibited ID On continuous Contemplation Belowbeltline. [1] It's not just women who get preyed upon with rabid comments by the nasty bullies who have left the playground but not their old habits. 'Vile stalker of shadow slime' is a line that would fit well in this poem. All the worst comments I received were all from the same male. When I checked such comments of his went back at least two years. Some of us aim to try to express and sow beauty within this world. We may wrote a few poems like this upon topics we would rather not have to deal with, but when a voice is necessary it must speak out for that which is just and virtuous. Excellent lines to confront the stalkers from the shadows. 10+++++