Independence Poem by Brian Dorn
Independence
Reach out to the leaves
As they fall from the trees
All at once the wind makes them run
They fly off alone
Each on their own
To wherever the breeze sends them
Now free to roam
Away from their home
Declaring their own independence
It's nice when the wind blows them back this way everyonce in a while. My oldest leaf, I mean daughter is roaming quite far but in physical distance only. I guess I'm going through half an empty nest syndrome as still have one more to go, it seems to soon. I love this poem, it speaks to me of the cycle of nature...the cycle of life. All the best, Diane
Excellent write Brian. It is very true. I think you are absolutely right on this one. Take care.
love this brian. thanks for coming over to my side of the house. love.
Great write! Sounds a lot like Fall...but I'm not quite done wringing the last few drops out of summer yet... Hugs, dee
They fly off alone Each on their own To wherever the breeze sends them Now free to roam Away from their home Declaring their own independence its great expression great 10+++++++++
Brian, this is very visual. I liked it. It portrayed autumn very well. I also got the feeling that you wished you were one of those leaves being carried away to somewhere else by the wind. Great write. Thanks for sharing it. David
Just a trace perhaps of a wistful wish that you could follow in this lovely depiction of autumn, and a matching state of mind. jim
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Apparently, you speak leaf language very well. Beautiful poem, Brian. Warm regards, Sandra