Independence Poem by Brian Dorn

I love the simplicity of this poem, the images you have created and the strength it conveys in the last line. This poem made me long for Autumn - my favourite time of the year. Justine

enjoyable read, Brian. something quite refreshing here in straightforward symbolism. good meter. -Tailor

It's a nice metaphor, Brian. It works!

Great write! Sounds a lot like Fall...but I'm not quite done wringing the last few drops out of summer yet... Hugs, dee

love this brian. thanks for coming over to my side of the house. love.

They fly off alone Each on their own To wherever the breeze sends them Now free to roam Away from their home Declaring their own independence its great expression great 10+++++++++

I feel a beautiful @ energetic poem.

One I've not seen or heard before... I like it.

Brian, this is very visual. I liked it. It portrayed autumn very well. I also got the feeling that you wished you were one of those leaves being carried away to somewhere else by the wind. Great write. Thanks for sharing it. David

Just a trace perhaps of a wistful wish that you could follow in this lovely depiction of autumn, and a matching state of mind. jim