Inspired by the Zeitgeist
Ode to friendship
I'm exactly at that point
you described in your song,
where rivers flow milk and honey,
where people live in harmony,
do you still remember?
no competition
no hate,
no envy,
and time is forgotten,
but our friendship still exists on
solid ground
where there is no Babylonian confusion of tongues,
the people are true, often peaceful, no mistakes
would you please come with me to my galaxy
and don't forget to bring the Stars for me?
© Sylvia Frances Chan - All Rights Reserved
Monday 30 August 2021
Beautiful opening lines that strike the heart and uplift the soul.
Yes, I want to be in your galaxy, my friend, where there is no hate, competition nor envy
A well thought out poem. So timely and moving especially in this time of uncertainty. The world is full of hate. We need this write, like a capsule that invigorate our spirit to live happily and harmoniously
So beautifully woven, conveyed and presented. S great message to humanity. Toy Poem List. It must be Poem Of The Day.
Awesome poetry, words well said. There is no need to hate, to envy.5 stars
A fantastic ode to friendship.......Top stars.... : )
I love this poem where is no hate, envy or competition. Inspiring dearest Sylvia.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
What a wonderful and heartwarming poem, my friend. So heartfelt and simply conveyed.