Inspired By The Zeitgeist Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

Inspired By The Zeitgeist

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Inspired by the Zeitgeist
Ode to friendship

I'm exactly at that point
you described in your song,
where rivers flow milk and honey,
where people live in harmony,
do you still remember?

no competition
no hate,
no envy,
and time is forgotten,
but our friendship still exists on
solid ground

where there is no Babylonian confusion of tongues,
the people are true, often peaceful, no mistakes

would you please come with me to my galaxy
and don't forget to bring the Stars for me?

© Sylvia Frances Chan - All Rights Reserved
Monday 30 August 2021

Monday, August 30, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: poem,friendship
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Based on philosophy
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 August 2021

What a wonderful and heartwarming poem, my friend. So heartfelt and simply conveyed.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 August 2021

Beautiful opening lines that strike the heart and uplift the soul.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 August 2021

Yes, I want to be in your galaxy, my friend, where there is no hate, competition nor envy

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 August 2021

A well thought out poem. So timely and moving especially in this time of uncertainty. The world is full of hate. We need this write, like a capsule that invigorate our spirit to live happily and harmoniously

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 August 2021

So beautifully woven, conveyed and presented. S great message to humanity. Toy Poem List. It must be Poem Of The Day.

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Ramesh T A 08 September 2021

We are Stars in the galaxy as we are long time friends!

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Solomon Terlumun Tule 31 August 2021

Awesome poetry, words well said. There is no need to hate, to envy.5 stars

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 31 August 2021

A fantastic ode to friendship.......Top stars.... : )

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 31 August 2021

I love this poem where is no hate, envy or competition. Inspiring dearest Sylvia.

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M Asim Nehal 30 August 2021

Awesome Ode *****

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Sylvia Frances Chan

Sylvia Frances Chan

Jakarta, Indonesia
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