Is It A True One? Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

Is It A True One?

Rating: 4.7


I am waiting for some one special
You just messaged me you are coming
And asked me to wait...
I have not seen you
I don't know how you look like
But my eyes searching you
I know you are just a distance away
I feel you are somewhere nearby
Just a feeling you are nearing me
I can feel my heart beats,
beating fast.
And could feel a chilling sensation,
I can sense some thing pleasant
Fragrance coming along way
This could be none but......
You came so nearer and nearer
And from behind...
Coming near me
Just said Hello in a confident manly voice
I could feel the warmth breathe,
It just send shivering sensation in me.
I just stood dumb as if frozen
I just don't know what happened to me
Our eyes met for the first time
And I couldn't utter a single word as
You just happened to be the same
I have seen in my dreams
Just stood speechless
As if something happened to me
I just don't know
I wanted to ask many things but
Somewhere my words got struck...
I just couldn't believe...
I felt I know you very well
And didn't feel I am meeting you for first time.
I could feel two hearts beating into one
As if waiting for each other..
Is it just a dream or a true one?

©ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY GEETHA JAYAKUMAR 2014
© 2014.

Geetha Jayakumar.

Thursday, August 29, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Only my imagination....There is no one I am waiting for............
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Payal Parande 29 August 2013

Waiting is painful. Forgetting is painful. But not knowing which to do is the worse kind of suffering. bravo ma'am the one with dream and wishes the suffering through the wait....well pinned piece bravo

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Unwritten Soul 29 August 2013

The emotion is what made your poem here feel so real...it speaks from innerside from your pen..agreed with Payal here..nice one :) _Soul

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 29 August 2013

beauty must be praise as we are praising to lord love got no bound beautiful poem from heart 10

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Dave Walker 29 August 2013

An emotion packed poem. A great write.

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Akhtar Jawad 20 June 2014

It has become very difficult to decide whether you dream is more beautiful or your poem is more beautiful, but both belong to you and as such one thing is definite Geetha is beautiful, a beautiful poetess.

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Hazel Durham 01 September 2013

Full of intense passion as you meet your soulmate with such heartfelt words! Beautiful write!

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Heather Wilkins 31 August 2013

it is a beautiful encounter if only in dreams, lovely writing

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Kavya . 30 August 2013

a v nice flow in your poem....wish everyone whos waiting for some special someone, meets like the one in your poem....... also thx for the clarification given in your note, i just smiled reading it

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 29 August 2013

an intriguing poem with flow in writing

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