It's Raining Poem by Heather Burns

It's Raining

Rating: 4.9


It's raining tear-drops
gently on the sidewalk
of my heart

washing away dreams of
yesterday

puddles forming filling
the meadows
where once we strolled

hand in hand across
fields of flowers

picking daisies counting
petals
slipping a blossom in my
hair

soft winds continue
whispering your name
sweet breezes tantalize
my mind

filling it with thoughts
of you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Clarence Prince 01 October 2013

No wonder the song says memories don't live like people do, they always be you...!

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Matt Mooney 01 October 2013

I walk with you. Beautiful.

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Dee Corpolongo 01 October 2013

What a beautiful poem this is~ worded so beautiful and tenderly....like the petals on a rose~

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Valsa George 01 October 2013

Bathed in memories...! . When the present is washed away, the past emerges, whispering someone's name you love! Love this romantic write! !

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Danny Draper 28 September 2013

Delicate and romantic, fine thoughts.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 October 2017

Tear drops are gently falling down from sky to Earth. This is really lovely rain seen ever. Petals are slipping from blossom with continuity of breeze. Brilliant imagery is drawn here...10

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Li Sharry 29 March 2015

It is lovely poem, I love it very much!

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Khairul Ahsan 15 October 2013

'soft winds continue whispering your name sweet breezes tantalize my mind filling it with thoughts of you'. It's so sweet to hear the name of our loved ones pronounced!

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Ibnu Din Assingkiri 08 October 2013

love the simplicity of words selection and yet gave high impact as literature devices. thanks for sharing. :)

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Patricia Grantham 03 October 2013

Glad you are back Heather you were missing for a little while. Raining tears while cleansing the heart. Lost love brings tears and memories. Very touching.

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