It's Raining Poem by Heather Burns

It's Raining

Rating: 4.9

It's raining tear-drops
gently on the sidewalk
of my heart

washing away dreams of

puddles forming filling
the meadows
where once we strolled

hand in hand across
fields of flowers

picking daisies counting
slipping a blossom in my

soft winds continue
whispering your name
sweet breezes tantalize
my mind

filling it with thoughts
of you.

Poetheart Morgan 27 September 2013

Romantic and delicate memories of a past a fresh and white bouquet is what comes to my mind

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Adeline Foster 27 September 2013

Good poem! I too wrote one about rain on a different vein. Read mine - Cicatrix - Adeline

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Lyn Paul 28 September 2013

Pure romance in these words. Love the title washing away dreams of yesterday. Thank you

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Sallam Yassin 28 September 2013

every thing is making me remembering the future you

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 28 September 2013

Tear-drops raining on heart's sidewalks. Beautiful metaphor. Thank you.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 October 2017

Tear drops are gently falling down from sky to Earth. This is really lovely rain seen ever. Petals are slipping from blossom with continuity of breeze. Brilliant imagery is drawn here...10

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Li Sharry 29 March 2015

It is lovely poem, I love it very much!

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Khairul Ahsan 15 October 2013

'soft winds continue whispering your name sweet breezes tantalize my mind filling it with thoughts of you'. It's so sweet to hear the name of our loved ones pronounced!

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Ibnu Din Assingkiri 08 October 2013

love the simplicity of words selection and yet gave high impact as literature devices. thanks for sharing. :)

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Patricia Grantham 03 October 2013

Glad you are back Heather you were missing for a little while. Raining tears while cleansing the heart. Lost love brings tears and memories. Very touching.

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