It's raining tear-drops
gently on the sidewalk
of my heart
washing away dreams of
puddles forming filling
where once we strolled
hand in hand across
fields of flowers
picking daisies counting
slipping a blossom in my
soft winds continue
whispering your name
sweet breezes tantalize
filling it with thoughts
I walk with you. Beautiful.
What a beautiful poem this is~ worded so beautiful and tenderly....like the petals on a rose~
Bathed in memories...! . When the present is washed away, the past emerges, whispering someone's name you love! Love this romantic write! !
Delicate and romantic, fine thoughts.
Tear drops are gently falling down from sky to Earth. This is really lovely rain seen ever. Petals are slipping from blossom with continuity of breeze. Brilliant imagery is drawn here...10
It is lovely poem, I love it very much!
'soft winds continue whispering your name sweet breezes tantalize my mind filling it with thoughts of you'. It's so sweet to hear the name of our loved ones pronounced!
love the simplicity of words selection and yet gave high impact as literature devices. thanks for sharing. :)
Glad you are back Heather you were missing for a little while. Raining tears while cleansing the heart. Lost love brings tears and memories. Very touching.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
No wonder the song says memories don't live like people do, they always be you...!