Jealousy Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

Jealousy

Rating: 5.0


J ust i think of you though I’m J
E ndless chain of dreams, gle E
A pleasure, my eyes on you glue my A
L oves with pride swel L
O nly to thought, conceded the hell O
U nity nicer, two souls in lie U
S imply I feel jealous, need of fond caresse S
Y ou like me, me too, blue sk Y
bless

(2008/11/23)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rani Turton 23 November 2008

Nice poem though I hope it's not true, Persian N!

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Fiona Davidson 23 November 2008

Very clever peice of writing...thanks

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M M 23 November 2008

Jealousy is a hard feeling, which is difficult to control but... I was very well written, and one can easily 'touch' your emotions through these few lines. I hope you recover promptly.10!

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Anjali Sinha 23 November 2008

wow nice something different +++10 anjali

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Sarwar Chowdhury 23 November 2008

Fine play of words and significant! ......10+

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Kite Remedy 04 December 2008

At first, it's a lil confusing, but long after staring at the screen, I can understand the acrostic and so the meaning.. Great..

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 28 November 2008

nice to read; jelousy is well drawn

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Linda Winchell 27 November 2008

Very neat way of displaying the word! Ten! Linda

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Ewigi Liebe 25 November 2008

wonderful job and its nice to read

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Tsira Goge 24 November 2008

Remarkable jealousy the Nightingale... With the present of poets really blesses the dark blue sky, especially such jealous... 10....... Best wishes, Tsira

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