Eyan Desir

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.. Jealousy..A Collection Of 7 Deadly Sins - Poem by Eyan Desir

Resentment mixed with greed
Are the tunes she sings
From love and lust she bleed
On envy she feed
In human's core she live
Upset with what she loves
Envious of hearts possession
Dirtier than dirt
More twisted than a devil
It was her that corrupted him
And changed him into a rotten apple
Her song is a terrible thing
It opens a gate to other sins
This sour vindictive witch
Will push soul further from God
And straight into the fires of hell!

26th August 2009
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Comments about .. Jealousy..A Collection Of 7 Deadly Sins by Eyan Desir

  • (9/26/2009 12:42:00 AM)

    i'm growing sick of this theological perspective...it's unfair and ridiculous...you obviously blame sexy women for everything...i'm growing tired of the hate...let's see some personal reflection, bud... (Report)Reply

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  • (9/23/2009 8:06:00 PM)

    i like the depth of your poems, i will read more, they make people think but are all of them metaphorically against women. its not fun for me to read being that i am a she (Report)Reply

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  • (9/17/2009 8:58:00 AM)

    A lovely poem tackling and important human feeling which is liable to reduce love to dust instead of increasing it...Excessive Jealousy is really a sin and it stems from the FEAR of losing one's partner and by extension it bespeaks the person's lack of self- confidence, so he acts in a jealous and an over-protective way in order to keep his partner... good subject and good description too...voted 10! (Report)Reply

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  • (9/14/2009 10:41:00 AM)

    such is the power of jealousy, i suppose! (Report)Reply

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  • Romeo Della Valle (9/13/2009 7:55:00 PM)

    Insecurity is the root of jealousy, I was a very jealous person and thank God, I was able to overcome it, I became a wise man, since I learned the hard and painful ways, that whenever there is an ending, there is a new beginning, and also I learned not to miss what is gone, but the one new and flesh that is coming my way one day, , Love and Peace, Romeo (Report)Reply

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  • (9/13/2009 6:57:00 AM)

    Your excellent abstract poem suggests that sometimes all the human misery and pain of soul cannot be healed by love and moreover it can destroy love totally and irreversibly.Thank you for sharing.............10+++++++++ (Report)Reply

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  • (9/12/2009 8:52:00 PM)

    jealousy is truley like that it... it hurts... great write (Report)Reply

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  • (9/12/2009 8:17:00 PM)

    Jealousy is an emotion and typically refers to the negative thoughts and feelings of insecurity, fear, and anxiety over an anticipated loss of something that the person values, such as a relationship, friendship, or love. Jealousy often consists of a combination of emotions such as anger, sadness, and disgust. Jealousy differs from envy in that jealousy is about something one has and is afraid of losing, while envy refers to something one does not have and either wants to acquire or to prevent another from acquiring. (Report)Reply

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  • (9/12/2009 3:21:00 PM)

    yes, jealousy is just like that. a wound that eats the heart and soul... very well writen man! (Report)Reply

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  • (9/12/2009 6:56:00 AM)

    Jealousy is another word for envy/envious. There are souls who feel this way, a lot of them.This is an excellent piece of work, it speaks the truth...10+ (Report)Reply

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  • (9/12/2009 4:41:00 AM)

    You are so right jealousy does lead to other sins, greed to keep for oneself for one. A great write 10+ (Report)Reply

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  • (9/11/2009 11:28:00 PM)

    your poem reminds me of so many people i know.its a bit sad that people are truly like this but thats just how people are. (Report)Reply

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  • (9/11/2009 10:10:00 PM)

    awsome.....great wright...... (Report)Reply

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  • (9/11/2009 8:56:00 AM)

    this is, to say the least, fantastic.i like it.keep writing. (Report)Reply

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  • (9/11/2009 5:52:00 AM)

    A lovely poem tackling and important human feeling which is liable to reduce love to dust instead of increasing it...Excessive Jealousy is really a sin and it stems from the FEAR of losing one's partner and by extension it bespeaks the person's lack of self- confidence, so he acts in a jealous and an over-protective way in order to keep his partner... good subject and good description too...voted 10! (Report)Reply

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  • Louis Rams (9/10/2009 9:34:00 PM)

    jealousy is a sin and it starts from deep within.
    it can make the most calmest person change their ways
    and their lives will never be the same.

    good write a ten
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  • (9/10/2009 7:23:00 AM)

    seriously... naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa i dont like I believe that jealousy sometimes make people doing great things...really (Report)Reply

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  • (9/10/2009 5:55:00 AM)

    i liked it didnt make any sense in the begaining but then it was awesom wonderfull

    ps...read my new poem timeless thank you
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  • (9/10/2009 5:34:00 AM)

    great as usual...........10 for the man eyan (Report)Reply

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  • (9/9/2009 11:55:00 PM)

    10/10, keep writing =) (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, September 7, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, October 5, 2009


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