.. I Fly Away..........................(New Version) Poem by Eyan Desir

.. I Fly Away..........................(New Version)

Rating: 3.7

Life's celestial shores
Traps me! Like prison bars
I fall as a victim
To it's bitter roots
Struggling, fighting
To swallow some juice
Behind life's doors
I wear the black suit
Sadness sits on their face
Like birds I fly away
To a land of gladness
Where joy never ends.

June 11th 2009
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Christine Kerr 15 June 2009

Great observation of life and detail. You paint a vivid picture of what is seen in front of you. Thanks for sharing 10

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Mehreen Mujeeb 15 June 2009

deep and with beautiful imagery

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Lynda Robson 15 June 2009

A lovely poem with beautiful imagery, well done Dr Love, 10 Lynda xx

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Cheryl Lavender 16 June 2009

Beautifully written with a vision of what's to come and yet even in the beauty of and peace there is conflict. Well done!

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Poker Chips 16 June 2009

you paint pictures really well with your words id appreciate some pointers really good poem

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Rup Pokharel 12 September 2009

I like the way your emotion how is tamed and sensation tracked. Good piece of art of yours.10+++

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Obinna Eruchie 14 August 2009

Wonderful to fly away from that torment. Beautiful expression of feeling.

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Miriam Maia Padua 20 July 2009

deep thoughts... expressively written Life is just like that... 10+++ Maia

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full of expression with a wonderful flow.....10

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 23 June 2009

Trapped behind closed doors - yes I too would fly with the birds - free....a positive alternative

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