Valsa George


Jingle - Poem by Valsa George

Do not simply diddle
For life may pass in a twinkle
Hardly any time to dawdle
In life, joy and sorrow mingle

Before your powers dwindle
Enjoy it willful
As a child toying with shingles

For a change, play on the fiddle
And on your toes twiddle
Or go for a walk with your poodle
Or write an idyll
That could even be a doodle

Life which is a riddle
Is never a puddle
For you to muddle
But is to cuddle

Let it ring with a jingle
Even when you are single

Topic(s) of this poem: life

Form: Prose Poem


Poet's Notes about The Poem

When serious themes run out of stock, I go for this kind of stuff! Sorry if it sounds silly!

Comments about Jingle by Valsa George

  • Kavya .Kavya . (4/23/2015 5:34:00 AM)

    beautiful as always...the last line even if you are single...i feel singles enjoy more and life there rings with a jingle...lol.... (Report)Reply

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  • Amitava SurAmitava Sur (4/15/2015 1:48:00 AM)

    Very true, this life is so unpredictable that none can draw an inference to it. At the end of all this will move in it's own way. Hence............... let it ring............... with a jingle. you have no control ! ! ! (Report)Reply

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  • Rajesh ThankappanRajesh Thankappan (4/13/2015 11:24:00 AM)

    This is really a beautiful poem ringing sweet in the ear. Lap up the opportunities of life, and so I take the opportunity to savour this poem. (Report)Reply

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  • Chandra Thiagarajan (4/12/2015 6:03:00 AM)

    WONDERFUL monorhyming poem that captured my heart! Enjoyed it, Valsa! (Report)Reply

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  • Josey AlfredJosey Alfred (4/11/2015 12:10:00 PM)

    Really very beautifully rhymed. Wonderful work.enjoyed it. (Report)Reply

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  • Akhtar JawadAkhtar Jawad (4/11/2015 10:20:00 AM)

    The poem appears a lovely tune from a guitar. What a wonderful musical poem.....................10 (Report)Reply

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  • Bharati NayakBharati Nayak (4/11/2015 8:56:00 AM)

    Beautifully rhyming and with deep meaning- - - What I can say- -Wow- -wonderful. (Report)Reply

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  • Madathil Rajendran NairMadathil Rajendran Nair (4/10/2015 10:47:00 PM)

    What a beautiful rhyming! And what a great message. Loved this one, Valsa-ji. You enriched my vocab. (10) (Report)Reply

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  • Paul SebastianPaul Sebastian (4/10/2015 8:37:00 AM)

    Oh, what words you have mingled
    Made my heart found so tickled
    Even had a hearty chuckle!

    Valsa, a great write. Great rhymes. Enjoyed it! ! Thank you.
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  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (4/9/2015 8:11:00 PM)

    Do not simply diddle
    For life may pass in a twinkle.. Beautiful composition and enjoying it with wilful mood brings us closer towards essence of each beautiful words expressed. Really very nice poem shared. Heart touching. Excellent.10.
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  • Tirupathi ChandrupatlaTirupathi Chandrupatla (4/9/2015 9:59:00 AM)

    Life is a thick jungle
    Crossing it's not so simple
    Let your walk be nimble
    Face it with a twinkle.
    Beautiful poem full of life with great rhyme. It made me juggle a little. Thank you.
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  • Jayatissa K. LiyanageJayatissa K. Liyanage (4/9/2015 12:35:00 AM)

    Beautiful write. Well rhymed. Nice poem. (Report)Reply

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  • Sandra Feldman (4/9/2015 12:10:00 AM)

    Adorably cute!
    And very astute,
    Great sounds you did mingle,
    That made readers tingle
    We went you to know it,
    And thank you, dear Poet!
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    Valsa GeorgeValsa George(4/9/2015 12:15:00 AM)

    This response is amazing! The beauty lies in the fact that you could write it in the twinkle of a second! Thank you Sandra!

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 8, 2015

Poem Edited: Thursday, April 9, 2015


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