Jingle Poem by Valsa George

Jingle

Rating: 5.0


Do not simply diddle
For life may pass in a twinkle
Hardly any time to dawdle
In life, joy and sorrow mingle

Before your powers dwindle
Enjoy it willful
As a child toying with shingles

For a change, play on the fiddle
And on your toes twiddle
Or go for a walk with your poodle
Or write an idyll
That could even be a doodle

Life which is a riddle
Is never a puddle
For you to muddle
But is to cuddle

Let it ring with a jingle
Even when you are single

Wednesday, April 8, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
When serious themes run out of stock, I go for this kind of stuff! Sorry if it sounds silly!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 09 April 2015

Adorably cute! And very astute, Great sounds you did mingle, That made readers tingle We went you to know it, And thank you, dear Poet!

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Valsa George 09 April 2015

This response is amazing! The beauty lies in the fact that you could write it in the twinkle of a second! Thank you Sandra!

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 09 April 2015

Beautiful write. Well rhymed. Nice poem.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 09 April 2015

Life is a thick jungle Crossing it's not so simple Let your walk be nimble Face it with a twinkle. Beautiful poem full of life with great rhyme. It made me juggle a little. Thank you.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 April 2015

Do not simply diddle For life may pass in a twinkle.. Beautiful composition and enjoying it with wilful mood brings us closer towards essence of each beautiful words expressed. Really very nice poem shared. Heart touching. Excellent.10.

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Kavya . 23 April 2015

beautiful as always...the last line even if you are single...i feel singles enjoy more and life there rings with a jingle...lol....

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Amitava Sur 15 April 2015

Very true, this life is so unpredictable that none can draw an inference to it. At the end of all this will move in it's own way. Hence............... let it ring............... with a jingle. you have no control ! ! !

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Rajesh Thankappan 13 April 2015

This is really a beautiful poem ringing sweet in the ear. Lap up the opportunities of life, and so I take the opportunity to savour this poem.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 12 April 2015

WONDERFUL monorhyming poem that captured my heart! Enjoyed it, Valsa!

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Josey Alfred 11 April 2015

Really very beautifully rhymed. Wonderful work.enjoyed it.

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