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Mind is like a tree
Questions are leaves
There are thorns on a tree
There are flowers
Leaves become pale in the autumn
Flowers may shed!
... or be snatched! !

Tirupathi Chandrupatla 25 December 2013

The poem is an eye opener. Nice structure and a novelty. A new way to look at things. Thank you.

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Shahzia Batool 19 December 2013

this one inspired me to write something on almost the same pattern! a good poem! thank you Ali bhai!

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Zoya Khalid 17 December 2013

u don't waste a single word and the idea is fully expressed....well that's great...Read ur other poems as well...ur writing style is impressive.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 28 November 2013

Wow nice metaphor poem! Great to read. In my urdu i'd say bohot khoob. Pls coment my latest poem

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Mj Lemon 05 April 2017

I am very moved by this work. You leave undefined the flowers and the thorns. They may represent good and bad. They may represent youth and wisdom....there is a balance of exuberance and optimism, and a hint of maturity and caution. Well done!

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Valsa George 11 January 2017

Nothing is permanent! Like falling leaves and withering petals, life will also come to its eventual decay! Thoughtful write!

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Unwritten Soul 01 September 2016

So in a seminar or knowledge center, it must be like a tree full of leaves...so green :) hahahaha...wonderful idea, mind is like a tree...it keeps on growing, renewing and so lively..we can have different aesthatic tree shape by having unique mind!

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Ramesh Rai 03 January 2014

when trees are not in order otherwise its is a garden

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Sallam Yassin 25 December 2013

beauty and ugliness in good and bad sin and grace dwelt in a same soul the death is the swift taker of all in a paleness of times/ share and bright

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