Going from flower to flower,
To feel the fragrant they shower,
Find in their colors a sense of delight,
Keep, they, me in a happy flight,
Adore I their freshness and charms,
Receiving all hearts with open arms,
Their hearts treating everyone the same,
No edge for the caste, no status no name,
In all my troubles, and miseries mine,
I come to you and feel all fine…..
dear zaib no doubt nature is the very first thing attracts poets, it guides our souls our passion and reshape our lives just nature is an example of it...theme is quite simple but rhyming is much better, impersonation did well but need to be more vivid, should focus on words that echo rhythm and melody and melody
how beautiful and truth from your heart............a joy to read love payal.
Nice write... I felt as if I was reading Wordsworth... excellent work dear... nature can truly heal us, whatever happens, V should return to nature... nature has a soothing effect on one's soul... the theme on which the poem is written is extraordinary.... another master piece from William Jehanzeb
Just set and observe how beautiful and perfect nature is. They full us of beautiful and pleasure. Love this one! ! !
Absolutely lovely and you are so right it is just nature and how gorgeous is she in the eyes in all forms of the world...a crisp refreshing write...tyvm karen
How creative! ... soothing poem... delivers an exemplary message of equality. Well done, dear poet! ... :)
As exquisitely penned as d butterfly, n soo nice to read! A gud poet u r.
Nature is the most addictive thing in the world, if one learn to appreciate it! well written!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
In all my troubles, and miseries mine, I come to you and feel all fine….. beautiful lines! ! !