Learn From The New! Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Learn From The New!

Rating: 5.0


old leaves have fallen down
old grasses have withered away
new leaves are smiling on the lap of the twig
child grasses are dancing on the vast chest of the field
bees are buzzing on the garden of the world
butterfly is kissing my righteous rose and whispering me-
"You are innocent new;
I need to learn a lot of lessons from you! "

-February 06,2019 Chattogram

Wednesday, February 6, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: irony,learning
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ratnakar Mandlik 06 February 2019

An inspirational life song showing a few aspects of life cycle devised by nature and lessons imparted through them. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 February 2019

Child grass is dancing on the vast chest of field bees are buzzing on garden of world butterfly is kissing my righteous rose....scintillating expression with fabulous imagery! (10)

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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 January 2022

Didactic! Appreciated the thought contents...5 stars

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 February 2019

Lessons! ! Seasons! Living and Learning always. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Abhipsa Panda 19 February 2019

beautifully framed lines......

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Carl Roussell 09 February 2019

Good poem on seeing life with unbiased eyes and heart. A 10

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 07 February 2019

I endorse great poet - - - Doc DKS BEAUTY in nature very few do see you and I do BD is beautiful I have seen most of it SONAAR BANGLA JI GOLDEN LAND OF BEAUTY

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