Let's Be More Alone Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

Let's Be More Alone

Rating: 4.7


unkind your heart befriends me in this smog
sorrow comes to guide in fear of alone
this path went away too far years ago
peacock feathers are alive still in book
petals of tuberose remind gone tears
autumn gone, winter comes, last leaves fall down
spring comes, sun rises to remove all fogs
wind blows dust of heart to lava valley
gild sunlight of day shows the crystal path
weigh, o darling weigh your changing lorn mind
how many bits the stray love you nurse fine
this summer scorches my heart, boils the dream
no humble folks this warming finds as one
sweating the gambled heart, let's we set free,
set free the bird on sea sky; no more cry
wanna not see the death of moan waiting
long live o darling your maple queen crown
long live the breakup life with happy throne



-July 04,2019 Chattogram

Thursday, July 4, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: alone,life,lost love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kostas Lagos 04 July 2019

Nice work my friend! Really enjoyable

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Jane Campion 04 July 2019

An imaginative poem of excellence.

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Pallab Chaudhury 04 July 2019

a good poem about love and life.... Thanks for sharing with us. pc

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 July 2019

" Long live the breakup life" ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Anjandev Roy 04 July 2019

Magnificent poem. Pleasant representation. Thank u, dear poet. anjandev roy.

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Nosheen Irfan 07 July 2019

Beautifully poignant piece. Loneliness and lost love are my favorite themes. You have captured them poetically n artistically. Kudos!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 06 July 2019

Poignant and heart rending write. Vivid depiction of solitude. " wanna not see the death of moan waiting? Fascinating line from a beautiful poem.

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Aniruddha Pathak 05 July 2019

Emotionally charged, poetic phrases flooding in, imaginative, enjoyed reading it.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 05 July 2019

long live o darling your maple queen crown/long live the breakup life with happy throne....beautiful expression! An excellent work...10

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 04 July 2019

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