Let’s Go Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

Let’s Go

Rating: 5.0


Like a multi-colored kite
Cuddling fragrance of
Soft wooly clouds—
Upon the navy blue
Below the cruel soil
Let’s go—

Beyond the mysterious
Endless space
Non-feelings zone—
Cutting the navel cord
Of unkind time
Let’s go—

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bob Blackwell 11 June 2009

To fly free like a bird, up there amonst the soft wool fluffy clouds, such sweet energy of the mind creates a dream......come on Lets Go, lovely images.

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Saadat Tahir 09 June 2009

providence does not allow any body the pleasure of escape unless it controls the voltage and temperature.... thud...strap.....clap....singgggg poetic extravagenz but on track good write sir...well thought out and beautiful as the dark gathering clouds...with a hint of tsunami and also deliverance... cheers an ten

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Indira Babbellapati 09 June 2009

yeah, let's go...! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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premji premji 09 June 2009

we go........ kick start............ but how, when this earth is a great prison?

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beautifullllllllllllllll call for the that travel to that free zone...smoothly penned as weightless wind which soar above all...10++++ Beyond the mysterious Endless space Non-feelings zone— Cutting the navel cord Of unkind time Let’s go—

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Brishti Mazumdar 16 June 2009

....Soft wooly clouds— Upon the navy blue Below the cruel soil Let’s go— Wow...excellent thought process...10++

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Rakesh Bedi 16 June 2009

Beyond the mysterious..... You excel here friend! From a physical void to mete-physical void! !

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Sandra Martyres 16 June 2009

Reminds me of the freedom expressed in the song...Lets go fly a kite up into the atmosphere....lovely piece 10+

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Mona Martinez 14 June 2009

nice poem. your words fit this so perfectly.

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Vijay Gupta 12 June 2009

nice poem. thanks for writing it.....

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