Let's Remove Your Rotten Heart Comments

Excellent title! Quite the grabber. I wouldn't want to make you mad, either...but hey, poets are supposed to have a 'streak'. :) This poem brought vampires to mind...which makes it all the more interesting.

Intense, Mary. Hope you don't cross my path, I'd be SO scared, lol. I'd vote a good number if you allowed it.

I really like this, still loving and caring...It has such a different feel though to your recent work. A dark edge which i love. Thank you for sharing. Kindest Regards Slim. x.

Mary! it's a great surgery.............if the patient recovered? I like the humour which hides in the poem.

Dear Mary, Something about this reminds me of the story of the ice Queen, I don't know, what do you think.Either way it's another poem packed with honesty and feeling.Love Duncan

Stark images for intense kindness.

This is gory glory Mary, a real hard heart rendering poem. Clearly gives a vision of a 'bleeding heart' very well described. A gutsy one. Love Ernestine XXX

Kind Mary with her box of band-aids who would fix the world, how tender hearted you are. But, baby girl, I finally figured this out. The one with a broken heart is the only one who can fix it. But this poem surely expresses the pain that you suffer when you love someone who hurts. Read my poem, 'I'll Cry - For you.' This poem is really good, and that 'stretching yourself' I told you to try is really paying off. You just get better! Scarlett

MARY! ! ! Hmmm. I like the 'urgency' of this poem. Good hearts are at a premium though. finding a replacement might take a while. Good write! L

I know another who needs this emergency service. But if is performed will it make a difference to them? Good write Mary, very good. Patricia

Wow... strong message... and very vivid. Awesome as usual. Brian