Let's See The Sun Descending! Poem by Shahzia Batool

Let's See The Sun Descending!

Rating: 3.9


Come with me
on the edge of life!
Come let's do something new and think,
and unfurl the brave new world;

hand over ourselves to odd and clumsy thought-strain
then let's see what happens? and where? and how?
where does come the night-fall from?
let's go and see!

let's turn the side of the globe of the moon...
let's solve the mystery of the rainbow palette,
on skies and sands alike, , ,
that keeps us in all amazement!

where is the dale of deep sleep you know?
where dwell the slumbers sweet?
where do the dreams of joys come from?
let's go and touch those abstract dreams...
let's go and see the moonlit night
covering tall trees

let's go and see the skies in spring
let's go and see the sun descending
from the other side of the world!
come with me!

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Ghair mumkin nhi duniya mein koi kaam Batool
Jo kisi se nhi hota hay woh kr jaana hay! ! !
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Leonard Dabydeen 04 June 2012

A beautigul poem, rich in imagery, opening so many challenges in so many questions...'let's go and see the sun descending' is such a wonderful thought. TFS. Bless you.

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Unwritten Soul 02 June 2012

Yeah come on join us to watching the sun descending, and wait for moon ascending :) ..i like it! we will try many things for new life to think Shahzia...if possible we will wrap stars around the globe, belt with rainbows till the colors and shine drawn and immersed in the sea we gonna see bright shines earth and colorful land beautiful as what we dream isnt Shahzia? hahaha Keep dreaming but we must put reality as our basement :) Keep on writing and inspire us_Unwritten Soul

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Aman Sa 30 May 2012

But before we depart on this fairy journey let us once peep with what blessing is this ink blessed and thank it for giving us a dropp of it which our little grasp cannot hold all. Poetry is an all in all pic of the poets thoughts, i wonder with what ease you think. Regards :)

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Indira Babbellapati 30 May 2012

yes, i'm ready! this is a fairy tale in verse, dear lady!

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Walterrean Salley 29 May 2012

Chances to discover. Endless opportunities, just for the taking. The sky is the limit. A really encouraging poem.

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Valsa George 28 July 2013

The mysteries of life are engrossing, also baffling! Men through ages have been in an eternal quest to unravel the riddles of life and existence! Let us join this train of explorers travelling to realms far! A very absorbing write!

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Guy Lip-more 16 May 2013

Really great poem. some great lines, lets go and touch those abstract dreams Fantastic line.

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Osama Waqar 19 August 2012

ahh! u have made me remember the lines...... A poet could not but be gay In such a jocund company

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 23 June 2012

Life is like this exactly. We never know where we will be in the next minute. Life is a dream. If you dream of beauty, harmony, kindness, you get it. Just dream on lovely places and you will find the way to get there.

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Vipins Puthooran 08 June 2012

where is the dale of deep sleep you know? where dwell the slumbers sweet? where do the dreams of joys come from? I like these lines...and have to find my answers..... An excellent poem! ! ! ! ! 10++++++++

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