...Lies..... Poem by Eyan Desir

...Lies.....

Rating: 4.9


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Bullets in a Mouth
Dressed in white cloth
Shielding the blame
Polishing a sweet name
Germs of him that is dark
Leaks from mouths to Escape harm
A brush whiles he paints
A beautiful picture
In a ugly frame
The flower sweetening
Heart's dirty rags
Like knives pierce hearts
Pouring a stream of joy
When uncovered sour lives
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June 06/2009
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 18 June 2009

'A beautiful picture In a ugly frame' Wonderful poem on lies.

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Winnie Angel 17 June 2009

its a wonderful piece with much of life in it....winnie

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Sad _eyes 14 June 2009

Thanks a lot i am crying inside my soul i really love it and all of your others as well please keep writting my soul will be yours if you wish to take care of it as well as along with my love as you are a great poet of your own......

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this beautiful poem touched a subjjec in my mind that lies which happen here from some who wqrite 10 but they vote so much less than that..so i write now 10++++while i mean it and i rate same thing in the voting box..well done

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The Dreamer 13 June 2009

Straight to the point a meaningful write 10++++++

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rago rago 07 July 2009

certainly lies speak the truth....... how is it possible to write about lies? unless the truth in you sprouts.........

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Shashendra Amalshan 22 June 2009

yes indeed! ! ! ! lies can turn beautiful queens to dreaded serpents... liked this one eyen you said it well! ! ! 10+ with love shan

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A brush whiles he paints A beautiful picture In a ugly frame The flower sweetening Heart's dirty rags Like knives pierce hearts Pouring a stream of joy When uncovered sour lives....beautiful write dear... balanced thought. it is how we live.... read mine' I am disgrace and no separate ways

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Pandian Angelina 19 June 2009

Righteous anger Heartfelt pain Lies when like Truth half dressed Strut about De-robing is not A crime - But As you say a joy! Emotions Beautifully potrayed, Pls read my 'Deception' when you have time. Not so fine as yours maybe, but, heartfelt still the same! Angel.

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Anjali Sinha 18 June 2009

i like the pun on these words 'a beautiful picture in an ugly frame' good write anjali

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